Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is natural and personal, but it has some grammatical errors and slight redundancy. Improve grammar (e.g., "listening to music"), tighten sentences, and add one specific example to enrich content. Use a clear topic sentence, one supporting detail with a linking word, and a short concluding comment.

Ví dụ: Yes — I often look out of the window on long road trips because I find the changing landscape relaxing. For example, when travelling along the coast last summer, I watched fishermen at work and listened to music, which helped me imagine different stories about the places we passed. Because of that, I usually feel peaceful and inspired during journeys.

Gợi ý: Your message is clear but phrasing is awkward and there are tense errors. Make sentences more concise, correct grammar (e.g., "isn't specific to car rides", "when I see"), and give a concrete example of a memorable photo to make the answer more specific and engaging. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Not specifically for car rides — I take photos of interesting scenes whenever I can. For instance, last month I photographed a golden field at sunset from a moving car; although it was taken quickly, the contrast of light and shadow made it one of my favorite shots. Therefore, I usually try to capture anything that catches my eye.

Gợi ý: Your answer conveys feeling well but contains some mistakes (e.g., "the sea makes me feel calm"; avoid using 'she' for the sea) and informal fragments. Improve grammatical accuracy, combine short sentences with linking words, and add a specific detail or recent experience to support why you prefer the sea.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because it makes me feel calm and rested. For example, last weekend I swam for an hour and then sat on the shore reading a book, which helped me unwind after a busy week. Consequently, being by the sea is my favourite way to relax.

× I love to look out the window at the scenery and while I'm listening music and making up scenarios in my head.

✓ I love to look out the window at the scenery while I'm listening to music and making up scenarios in my head.

The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' when followed by an object (listen to music). Also, 'while' should directly connect the two actions without 'and' before it in this structure; using 'while' plus the -ing form correctly links simultaneous actions. Suggestion: Use 'listening to music' and keep parallel -ing forms for simultaneous actions.

× For me, taking photos of the scenery outside the car window isn't specialized for car rides.

✓ For me, taking photos of the scenery outside the car window isn't specific to car rides.

The phrase 'specialized for' is awkward and incorrect in this context; 'specific to' correctly expresses that the action is not limited to car rides. This is not strictly a number error but fits best under phrasing to correct plural/singular concept of being 'for' something; the main correction is word choice. Suggestion: Use 'specific to' to indicate limitation or exclusivity.

× I always take a picture when I saw a good scenery and anything actually that I liked I always take photos.

✓ I always take a picture when I see a good scene, and actually anything that I like I always photograph.

The clause uses inconsistent tenses: 'always' indicates habitual present, so 'saw' (simple past) should be 'see' (simple present). Also 'scenery' is uncountable and should be 'scene' for a specific view; 'take photos' is acceptable but 'photograph' is more natural here. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent for habitual actions (use present simple) and choose correct countable/uncountable nouns.

× I prefer the sea because sea makes me feel like so calm and so rested.

✓ I prefer the sea because the sea makes me feel so calm and so rested.

When referring to 'sea' in general, use the definite article 'the sea'. Additionally, 'feel like so calm' is incorrect: drop 'like' and say 'feel so calm'. Suggestion: Use 'the sea' and 'feel so calm' for correct article and verb-complement structure.

× I love the feeling she brings to me.

✓ I love the feeling it brings me.

The sea is an inanimate noun and should be referred to as 'it' rather than 'she'. Also, English prefers the shorter 'brings me' rather than 'brings to me'. Suggestion: Use 'it' for inanimate things and prefer concise word order: 'brings me'.

× That's all. Makes me feel good and relaxed.

✓ That's all. It makes me feel good and relaxed.

The second sentence lacks a subject; 'Makes me feel...' is a sentence fragment. Adding the subject 'It' (referring to the sea) completes the sentence. Suggestion: Ensure each sentence has a subject and verb; avoid fragments.