Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
Thí sinh
I usually I usually look out the window at the secondary because I like it.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
Thí sinh
Uh, yes, I take, I love taking photo of the secondary outside the car window because I want to remember interesting place. Uh, for example, I usually take photo.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
Thí sinh
I prefer the sea because I live near the uh, and swimming and watching sunset, for example, I go uh, I go from sun.
Đánh giá
Tổng
Part 1
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần tự nhiên hơn, tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi từ vựng (‘secondary’ sai nghĩa). Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (khi nào, vì sao) và dùng liên từ để mạch lạc. Ví dụ sửa lỗi phát âm/gramma: ‘I usually look out of the window to enjoy the scenery.’
Ví dụ: I usually look out of the window to enjoy the scenery because I find it relaxing. For example, when I travel in the afternoon I like watching the countryside pass by, which helps me unwind.
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Cần trả lời trực tiếp, tránh lặp từ và dùng danh từ/phrasal correct (‘photos of the scenery’). Thêm lý do cụ thể và một ví dụ ngắn. Dùng liên từ như ‘because’ hoặc ‘so’ để nối ý và giới hạn độ dài 2–4 câu.
Ví dụ: Yes, I love taking photos of the scenery outside the car window because I want to remember interesting places. For example, when I drive through rural areas I often photograph unique houses and fields to share with my friends.
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời thiếu mạch lạc và có nhiều tiếng lạc/lưỡng lự. Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (‘I prefer the sea.’), sau đó giải thích lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: hoạt động, cảnh vật) và kết luận ngắn. Tránh nói ‘uh’ và hoàn chỉnh câu (e.g., ‘I live near the sea’), dùng liên từ như ‘because’ hoặc ‘for example’.
Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I live nearby and enjoy swimming and watching the sunset. For example, I often go to the beach in the evenings to relax after work and take walks along the shore.
Ngữ pháp
× I usually I usually look out the window at the secondary because I like it.
✓ I usually look out the window at the scenery because I like it.
The student repeated 'I usually' which is unnecessary and 'secondary' is a wrong word choice; the correct noun is 'scenery'. This is a sentence structure and word choice error. Suggestion: remove the duplicate phrase and use the correct noun 'scenery' when referring to views outside a window.
× Uh, yes, I take, I love taking photo of the secondary outside the car window because I want to remember interesting place. Uh, for example, I usually take photo.
✓ Yes, I love taking photos of the scenery outside the car window because I want to remember interesting places. For example, I usually take photos.
Errors include singular 'photo' where plural 'photos' is needed, wrong word 'secondary' instead of 'scenery', and missing articles/plural for 'interesting place'. Use plural 'photos' when talking generally and 'interesting places' for multiple sights. Also separate filler words and reduce hesitation for clarity.
× I prefer the sea because I live near the uh, and swimming and watching sunset, for example, I go uh, I go from sun.
✓ I prefer the sea because I live nearby, and I enjoy swimming and watching the sunset. For example, I often go to the beach at sunset.
The original has fragmented structure, missing subjects and verbs, incorrect preposition 'from sun', and lacks articles. Corrections add missing verbs ('enjoy'), correct prepositions ('nearby', 'to the beach at sunset'), and include the article 'the' for 'sunset'. Suggestion: form complete clauses, use appropriate prepositions, and include articles where needed.
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