Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more natural. Start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific details using linking words. Correct grammar (verb forms, articles) and avoid redundancy. For example, say you enjoy watching the landscape and explain why or give a short example of what you notice.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I especially enjoy watching the sunlight on buildings and trees because it helps me relax, and sometimes I notice small details like people walking or birds flying, which makes the journey more interesting.

Gợi ý: Be specific about when and how you take photos and use natural phrasing. Correct awkward wording (e.g., “Android scenery capture sceneries” is unclear). Use linking words to add a brief reason or frequency. Keep it concise and grammatically correct.

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes take photos of the scenery from the car window, especially when the light is good or the landscape is unusual. Usually I use my phone camera to capture mountains, rivers or interesting buildings to remember the trip.

Gợi ý: Expand slightly with a direct reason and one specific detail. Use a linking word to connect the reason and an example to make the answer more complete while staying concise.

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking and the fresh, quiet atmosphere. For example, I like walking on forest trails and admiring panoramic views, which I find more peaceful than crowded beaches.

× Yes I like it to watch windows and the sun is when I traveling by bus or car.

✓ Yes, I like to look out of the windows and watch the sun when I am traveling by bus or car.

Errors: 'like it to watch' is incorrect verb pattern and wording; 'look out of the windows' is the natural collocation; 'the sun is when I traveling' has wrong verb 'is' and missing auxiliary 'am' for present continuous. Grammar problem type: present participle form (use of traveling) and sentence structure. Suggestion: Use 'like to' + base verb or 'like' + gerund consistently (e.g., 'I like looking out of the window'). Use 'when I am traveling' to form present continuous time clause.

× I feel relaxed and it give me peace while traveling.

✓ I feel relaxed and it gives me peace while I am traveling.

Errors: Subject-verb agreement with 'it give' should be 'it gives'; 'traveling' in a time clause requires auxiliary 'am' for first person present continuous: 'I am traveling'. Grammar problem type: present participle form (traveling) and subject-verb agreement. Suggestion: Use 'gives' for third-person singular and include 'I am' to form the present continuous time clause.

× Yes, I like Android scenery capture sceneries out of the window while I'm traveling by bus or car.

✓ Yes, I like taking photos of the scenery outside the window while I'm traveling by bus or car.

Errors: 'Android scenery capture' is incorrect wording; 'sceneries' is not commonly used for photos — use 'scenery' or 'scenes'; missing correct verb 'take photos' or 'capture'. Grammar problem type: article errors and word choice leading to noun form errors. Suggestion: Use 'taking photos of the scenery outside the window' or 'capturing the scenes outside the window'. Maintain 'scenery' as an uncountable noun.

× I prefer mountains.

✓ I prefer the mountains.

Error: Missing definite article 'the' when referring to mountains in general as a preference (we usually say 'the mountains' when contrasting with 'the sea'). Grammar problem type: singular and plural/article usage. Suggestion: Use 'the mountains' to indicate the mountain environment in general when answering a 'mountains or the sea' preference question.