Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct, concise and coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence that answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid fragmented phrases and repetition. Work on grammar (prepositions, articles) and sentence flow.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy seeing changing landscapes. For example, I like watching trees and small villages pass by, which helps me relax and pass the time. Also, sometimes I notice interesting architecture or farmers working in the fields, which makes the journey more enjoyable.

Gợi ý: Answer clearly and correct awkward phrases. Use precise vocabulary (e.g. "while travelling by car") and avoid repetition. Give a brief reason and one specific example to support your answer. Keep to max 4–5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery when I travel by car because I want to remember beautiful moments. For instance, last month I photographed a golden sunset over a rice field and later used the picture as my phone wallpaper. I usually take photos quickly through the window and sort them into an album after the trip.

Gợi ý: Give a clear preference in the first sentence, then provide a concise reason with specific details. Correct grammar (subject-verb agreement, word order) and avoid repeating the same adjective. Use linking words like "because" or "because of" to show cause and effect.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because it makes me feel calm and relaxed. For example, I enjoy walking along the shore, listening to the waves, and watching the changing colors of the water at sunset. The sea’s breeze and open views help me forget daily stress.

× In my opinion, I consider looking to the scenery from the bus or train is a very interesting thing.

✓ In my opinion, looking at the scenery from the bus or train is very interesting.

The original sentence mixes verbs awkwardly ('I consider looking to the scenery ... is') and uses incorrect preposition 'to' with 'looking'. This is a present tense general statement; use simple present and the correct preposition 'at'. Remove redundant phrase 'I consider' or integrate it correctly: 'I consider looking at the scenery ... to be very interesting.' For clarity and conciseness, use 'looking at the scenery ... is very interesting.'

× I need.

✓ (Remove sentence)

'I need.' is an incomplete sentence with no object or complement, so it lacks required sentence elements. Either provide the object (e.g., 'I need to relax') or remove it. Here it appears extraneous, so deleting it fixes the transcript.

× I like.

✓ (Remove sentence)

'I like.' is incomplete because it lacks an object ('I like it' or 'I like watching'). Provide a complete thought or remove the fragment. It is redundant next to other full sentences, so remove it.

× I like to watch nature through the window.

✓ I like to watch nature through the window.

This sentence is correct after corrections above. 'Through the window' is a valid prepositional phrase. No change needed. Included to show it matches allowed problem types (no error).

× I always take a shot of the scene when I am traveling by passport car and save it to my gallery.

✓ I always take a photo of the scene when I am traveling by car and save it to my gallery.

'Passport car' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'private car' or simply 'car'. 'Take a shot' is informal but acceptable; 'take a photo' is clearer. The tense 'am traveling' is present continuous appropriate for current habitual actions in speech, but simple present 'travel' also works. Replace 'passport car' with 'car' to correct the meaning and keep grammar consistent.

× My phone is full of natural natural photos of the scene.

✓ My phone is full of natural photos of the scene.

The sentence repeats 'natural' twice which is a duplicate word error, not a grammatical category from the list but functions as a redundancy. Remove the duplicate. 'Photos' plural is correct to match 'is full of'.

× I like going to the sea and looking at what it make me give me a relaxation relaxed feeling when I go, when I look at the sea and the blue and the blue color of the sea.

✓ I like going to the sea and looking at it because it makes me feel relaxed; the blue color of the sea gives me a sense of relaxation.

Multiple issues: subject-verb agreement ('it make' should be 'it makes') is a third-person singular error (ID 2 and 27), incorrect object and verb phrases ('give me a relaxation relaxed feeling' is ungrammatical), and repetition/redundancy ('the blue and the blue color'). Use simple present 'it makes me feel relaxed' for general truth. Combine ideas with clear structure: 'looking at it' (correct pronoun) and 'the blue color ... gives me a sense of relaxation.' This corrects agreement, word order, and removes repetition.