Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cần trả lời rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn; dùng câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, tránh từ sai và câu không hoàn chỉnh. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng một câu trực tiếp trả lời “Yes/No” và giải thích lý do. (2) Loại bỏ từ không đúng (ví dụ “Kasich”) và thay bằng từ thích hợp như “bored” hoặc “car-sick”. (3) Dùng tối đa 3–4 câu, thêm liên từ đơn giản (because, so, when) để liên kết ý. (4) Dùng từ vựng chính xác như “relaxing”, “enjoy the view”, “distracts me from feeling car-sick”.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because watching the scenery helps me relax. For example, I find the passing countryside calming and it distracts me from feeling car-sick. So I prefer to gaze outside rather than use my phone.

Gợi ý: Cần làm câu trôi chảy hơn, sửa một vài lỗi ngữ pháp và tránh lặp từ. Cụ thể: (1) Mở đầu trực tiếp với câu chủ đề phủ định/khẳng định. (2) Sử dụng danh từ số nhiều hoặc dạng đúng (“photographs” hoặc “taking photos”). (3) Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: type of scenes or when you take them). (4) Dùng liên từ đơn giản để nối ý (for example, because, so).

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photographs of the scenery outside the car window because I want to remember interesting views. For example, I usually snap pictures of mountains or coastal scenes when the light is nice, so I can look back at those memories later.

Gợi ý: Cần trả lời rõ ràng, thay thế cụm từ lạ và sửa lỗi phát âm/diễn đạt. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng: state preference (I prefer the sea). (2) Giải thích lý do cụ thể và logic (e.g. fresh air, relaxation, activities). (3) Tránh lặp từ và filler (uh, umm) — thay bằng câu nối như “because” hoặc “so”. (4) Giữ 2–4 câu và dùng từ vựng phù hợp như “relaxing”, “fresh air”, “scenery”.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because it feels more relaxing and the air is fresher. For instance, I enjoy walking along the beach and listening to the waves, which helps me unwind more than hiking in the mountains.

× I'd like to look out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or by car is the way to help me avoid getting Kasich sometime.

✓ I'd like to look out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or by car because it helps me avoid getting seasick sometimes.

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and unclear phrasing ('is the way to help me avoid getting Kasich sometime' is ungrammatical and 'Kasich' appears to be a typo for 'seasick'). Rearranged the sentence into a correct clause structure using 'because' to link reason and corrected the noun to 'seasick'. Suggestion: separate the main idea and the reason into clear clauses and check for typos or incorrect words.

× It's the very youthful way to avoid me, to train me, prevent me from.

✓ It helps me relax and prevents me from feeling sick.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear ('the very youthful way to avoid me, to train me, prevent me from' does not form a coherent idea). Rewritten to convey a plausible meaning: looking out helps relaxation and prevents sickness. Suggestion: express one clear idea per sentence and use verbs with correct objects (e.g., 'prevents me from feeling sick').

× Yeah, I'm very keen on taking photograph of the landscape outside the car window.

✓ Yeah, I'm very keen on taking photographs of the landscape outside the car window.

The singular noun 'photograph' after 'taking' is incorrect; the plural 'photographs' or the gerund phrase 'taking a photograph' should be used. Also 'keen on' requires a noun or gerund phrase. Suggestion: use 'taking photographs' or 'taking a photograph' depending on intended meaning.

× It's very it's a good way to keep memory alive of landscape, breathtaking landscape or destination.

✓ It's a good way to keep memories of a breathtaking landscape or destination alive.

The original has repetition and poor word order ('It's very it's a good way' and 'keep memory alive of landscape'). Corrected to natural English: 'keep memories ... alive' and added articles 'a' before 'breathtaking landscape'. Suggestion: avoid repetition and use correct noun forms ('memories' plural) and article placement.

× A bunch of Martin Aussie NC is very awesome, but for me, the sea is very, uh, is more, umm, more beautiful.

✓ Some mountains are very impressive, but for me the sea is more beautiful.

The phrase 'A bunch of Martin Aussie NC' is unclear and likely incorrect; replaced with 'Some mountains' to match the question. Removed filler words and redundant 'is very, uh, is more'. Suggestion: state the comparison clearly: 'X is more beautiful' and avoid unnecessary fillers.

× In the sea, I can, uh, breathe easily and feel and feel the wonderful smooth fears here.

✓ At the sea, I can breathe easily and feel the wonderful, soothing breeze.

The original repeats 'feel' and uses 'fears' which is incorrect; likely intended 'breeze' or 'air'. Also 'in the sea' is wrong for being by the seaside; use 'at the sea' or 'by the sea'. Suggestion: use correct nouns ('breeze') and avoid repetition; choose appropriate preposition for location.