Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변은 질문에 직접적으로 대답했지만 문장이 어색하고 문법적 오류와 반복이 많습니다. 문장은 간결하게 주제 문장으로 시작하고, 필요하면 한두 개의 구체적 세부사항을 덧붙이세요. 연결어(for example, because, so)를 올바르게 사용하고 불필요한 반복을 제거하세요. 또한 관사와 동사 형태(예: ‘watch outside’ → ‘look outside’, ‘They have many things’ → 구체적 명사구 사용)를 정확히 고치세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus because I enjoy seeing different scenes. For example, I like watching people on the street and the changing landscapes, which helps me relax during the trip.

Gợi ý: 짧게 잘 답했고 예시도 제시했지만 문법과 어순, 관사 사용이 어색합니다. 문장을 자연스럽게 연결하기 위해 접속사(if → when)와 관사(a/the)을 정확히 사용하고 동사 형태를 고치세요. 또한 한두 개의 구체적 상황(예: sunsets, unusual buildings)을 넣어 답변을 더 풍부하게 하세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes take photos from the car window. When the weather is beautiful or I see something unusual, like a colourful sunset or an interesting building, I usually take a quick picture.

Gợi ý: 의도를 알 수 있으나 문법적 오류(시제, 동사원형, 전치사 등)와 표현의 부정확함이 눈에 띕니다. 주제 문장으로 분명히 시작하고 이유를 linking word(such as, because, since)를 사용해 설명하세요. 구체적인 활동(예: hiking, camping)이나 감정(why you enjoy)도 더하면 좋습니다.

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains. I used to like the sea more, but since I started hiking with my parents recently, I have come to enjoy the fresh air and the peaceful trails in the mountains.

× Yes I do and I also like to watch outside during the bus trip because.

✓ Yes, I do, and I also like to look outside during bus trips.

The sentence is incomplete and awkwardly structured. 'watch outside' is not natural; use 'look outside'. 'the bus trip' should be plural 'bus trips' for general habits. Add commas to separate clauses. Suggestion: say 'I like to look outside during bus trips.'

× They have many things they have outside such as people or nature is fun.

✓ There are many things outside, such as people and nature, which are fun to see.

The original misuses 'they' and has a fragmented clause. Use 'there are' to introduce existence and 'such as' with 'and' to list items. Make relative clause 'which are fun to see' to explain.

× Yes, sometimes. For example if outside weather view is beautiful or something interesting come out, I usually take picture out of window.

✓ Yes, sometimes. For example, if the view outside is beautiful or something interesting appears, I usually take pictures out of the window.

Problems: missing article 'the' before 'view', 'come out' is incorrect for 'appear' in this context, 'take picture' needs plural 'pictures' and 'out of the window' is more natural. Also add commas for clarity.

× I prefer going to a mountain.

✓ I prefer going to the mountains.

Use 'the mountains' or 'a mountain' depending on meaning; 'going to a mountain' is uncommon for general preference. 'the mountains' correctly expresses preference for mountainous areas.

× I used to like see more than mountains but recently I climbing with my parents.

✓ I used to like the sea more than the mountains, but recently I have been climbing with my parents.

Errors: word order 'like see' should be 'like the sea' or 'liked seeing'. Comparison implied sea vs mountains was unclear; fixed to 'sea more than the mountains'. 'recently I climbing' is missing auxiliary and proper tense; use present perfect continuous 'have been climbing' for recent repeated activity.

× Since that I start to enjoy mountain.

✓ Since then, I have started to enjoy the mountains.

Use 'Since then' to refer to the previous time, use present perfect 'have started' for change starting in the recent past, and 'the mountains' plural and definite article required. Also 'enjoy mountain' should be 'enjoy the mountains'.