Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 在回答中要注意时态一致、句子简洁以及避免重复。可以先用一句主题句直接回答，然后用1-2个具体细节支持并使用连接词衔接。注意纠正双重否定（"don't not"）并改用更自然的表达（如"it makes the journey less boring"）。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I find the passing scenery very attractive because it changes constantly, and watching it makes the journey feel shorter and less boring.

Gợi ý: 回答要更连贯并纠正词汇和语法错误。用明确原因支持观点，并用连接词（because, so）使句子流畅。避免冗长重复，注意代词和时态的正确使用。

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't take photos from a moving car because the vehicle moves too fast and the pictures often turn out blurry. Instead, I prefer to enjoy the view with my eyes.

Gợi ý: 回答时先直接给出偏好，然后给出两到三个具体原因并使用连接词。注意句子结构（如动词不定式和形容词位置）和连贯性，避免语法错误（"it is very cool in"应更自然表达）。

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I enjoy relaxing on the beach and the vastness of the ocean makes me feel calm. Climbing mountains tires me out, so I usually choose coastal trips for rest and relaxation.

× Yes I do, I like to look out the window at the scenery when I was traveling.

✓ Yes, I do. I like to look out the window at the scenery when I travel.

句中描述为经常性的动作，应使用一般现在时而不是过去进行时“was traveling”。建议将“when I was traveling”改为“when I travel”以与主句现在时一致，表达习惯性动作。

× I think the most beautiful scenery is on the way and it makes me don't not feel so boring during the bus riding.

✓ I think the most beautiful scenery is on the way, and it makes me not feel so bored during bus rides.

原句中存在双重否定“don't not”和词类错误“boring”应为“bored”。同时“the bus riding”不自然，应使用复数或不可数短语“bus rides”。建议去掉双重否定，用“not feel so bored”，使句子更地道。

× No I don't. I don't like to take P photos of the scenery outside the car window because the car goes so fast and every time I pick up my the scenery I saw and I want to take the photos while just passed away.

✓ No, I don't. I don't like to take photos of the scenery outside the car window because the car goes so fast and every time I try to capture the scenery I saw, it has already passed.

原句有多处问题：多余的字母“P”；时态和表达不清，“every time I pick up my the scenery I saw and I want to take the photos while just passed away”语法混乱。应使用短语“try to capture”或“try to take photos”，并用现在时描述常发生的情况，再用“has already passed”表示拍不到的结果。建议简化为“every time I try to capture the scenery I saw, it has already passed”。

× I prefer the sea, I like go traveling to the beach it is very cool in and the sea is very wide makes me feel comfortable and I don't like to climb the mountain it is so tired for me.

✓ I prefer the sea. I like going to the beach because it is very cool, and the wide sea makes me feel comfortable. I don't like climbing mountains because it is too tiring for me.

原句存在动词形式错误和句子连接混乱：“like go traveling”应改为动名词“like going”；“it is very cool in”语序错误，应为“it is very cool”；“the sea is very wide makes me”需加连接词；“climb the mountain”更自然改为“climbing mountains”；“so tired for me”应为“too tiring for me”。建议按上述改正并将长句拆成几句使表达更清晰。