Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo
Cuộc hội thoại
Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
Thí sinh
Yes, I enjoy looking out of the window at the scenery on a bus or a train, particularly when I go somewhere new.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
Thí sinh
Yes, when I see nice landscapes I can't help myself taking photos on my phone so I can reveal them later.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
Thí sinh
Is hard to choose. I think I prefer the sea slightly more because I live in mainland which is far away from the sea. I always expect to see the sea.
Đánh giá
Tổng
Part 1
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
Điểm: 82.0Gợi ý: 回答自然且直接，但可以更简洁并包含具体细节以增强内容深度。建议：1) 开头用一分句直接回答问题；2) 用1–2句补充具体场景或感受（例如喜欢哪类风景、为什么喜欢或给你带来什么感觉）；3) 使用连词（e.g. because, so, especially）使逻辑更清晰。避免重复（bus或train在问题中已提及）。
Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy watching changing landscapes when I travel to new places, because seeing unfamiliar towns, fields and architecture makes the journey feel exciting and helps me remember the route.
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
Điểm: 74.0Gợi ý: 回答直接但有语法和用词不当（如“reveal”不合适）且略显口语化。建议：1) 用更准确的动词（e.g. save, look at, share）；2) 简短说明拍照目的或频率（例如留作纪念或发给朋友）；3) 使用连词（because/so）连接原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos on my phone when I see a beautiful view, because I like to save them as memories and sometimes share the best shots with my friends later.
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答表达意思清楚但有语法和流畅性问题（如缺主语、时态和词汇使用）。建议：1) 以完整句子直接回答（e.g. It's hard to choose, but I prefer the sea）；2) 解释原因时提供具体细节（例如小时候的记忆、海边活动）；3) 改正语法错误（使用‘I live inland’而不是‘lived in mainland’或‘far away from the sea’）。
Ví dụ: It's hard to choose, but I slightly prefer the sea because I live inland and rarely see the coast; the sound of waves and the open horizon feel relaxing and remind me of childhood holidays.
Ngữ pháp
× Yes, when I see nice landscapes I can't help myself taking photos on my phone so I can reveal them later.
✓ Yes, when I see nice landscapes I can't help myself from taking photos on my phone so I can view them later.
问题类型：动词 + -ing 形式和固定短语用法。短语 “can't help” 在英语中常用结构是 “can't help doing” 或更正式的 “can't help (but) do”，但在这里更自然的表达是 “can't help from doing” 也可接受。此外原句中用 “reveal them later” 不合上下文，摄影后是“查看”或“看照片”，应使用 “view” 或 “look at”。建议：记住常见固定搭配（例如 can’t help doing / can’t help from doing），并根据语境选用合适的动词（view/see/look at 而非 reveal）。
× Is hard to choose.
✓ It's hard to choose.
问题类型：句子结构错误。原句缺少主语“it”以及缩写形式“it's”。英语祈使或陈述句通常需要主语和谓语。建议：在表示一般情况或评论时用虚主语“it”，例如 “It's hard to choose.”。
× I think I prefer the sea slightly more because I live in mainland which is far away from the sea.
✓ I think I prefer the sea slightly more because I live on the mainland, which is far away from the sea.
问题类型：代词/介词使用错误与从句连接问题。首先固定搭配是 “on the mainland” 而非 “in mainland”。其次主句与定语从句之间需要逗号，并用关系代词 “which” 指代前面的整个名词短语。建议：记住固定搭配（on the mainland/on the island 等），并在使用非限制性定语从句时加逗号。
× I always expect to see the sea.
✓ I always hope to see the sea.
问题类型：动词用法不当。动词 “expect” 意为“期待某事发生”通常用于有理由相信会发生的情况（或接不定式构成期待实现的动作），而说“我总是期待看到大海”更自然的动词是 “hope”。因此建议用 “hope”，使语义更贴切。
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