Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện ngữ pháp và sự mạch lạc: tránh lặp từ và sửa lỗi phát âm/viết (ví dụ "other scenery", "win for the same"). Hãy mở đầu bằng một câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể, dùng liên từ để nối ý (because, so, and). Luyện phát âm và cấu trúc đơn giản, như thì hiện tại đơn cho thói quen và các cụm từ chính xác (relax, unwind, countryside, skyline).

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because it helps me relax. For example, I enjoy watching the countryside and the city skyline pass by on longer trips, so I can unwind and think quietly.

Gợi ý: Sửa ngữ pháp và dùng từ đúng: tránh dịch sát từ tiếng Việt (ví dụ "kissing your memory"). Trả lời trực tiếp bằng một câu chủ đề, sau đó cho lý do cụ thể. Nếu muốn nêu số lượng, nói rõ (e.g. "over 100 photos"). Tránh câu ngắt quãng; nối câu với because hoặc so. Luyện phát âm để tránh hiểu nhầm.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have taken over 100 photos of scenery through car windows because I like to keep visual memories of places I visit. I often review these pictures later to remember trips and plan future visits.

Gợi ý: Sửa ngữ pháp, từ vựng và mạch lạc: thay "For the same" bằng liên từ phù hợp (e.g. "For example"), sửa số nhiều/ít và danh từ (hills, clear my mind). Giữ câu chủ đề ngắn, thêm ví dụ cụ thể (hiking, fresh air) và dùng linking words để nối ý (because, for example, which helps).

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because they make me feel relaxed and closer to nature. For example, hiking up hills and breathing fresh air clears my mind and helps me feel peaceful.

× Yes, I often look out other scenery when I when I'm traveling by bus or car because it helps me relax and unwind and win for the same.

✓ Yes, I often look out at the scenery when I'm traveling by bus or car because it helps me relax and unwind.

Student used incorrect pronoun/phrase 'other scenery' and duplicated 'when'. Use the preposition 'at' with 'look out' to indicate observing something. Remove repeated words and the unclear phrase 'win for the same'. Suggestion: say 'look out at the scenery' and avoid repetition; keep the verb tense consistent with 'I'm traveling'.

× I enjoy watching the countryside and city skyline pass by on longer trips because it's.

✓ I enjoy watching the countryside and city skyline pass by on longer trips because it's relaxing.

The sentence ends with an incomplete clause 'because it's.' Complete the thought by adding an appropriate adjective (e.g., 'relaxing'). Ensure the clause explains the reason clearly.

× Yes, I have it over 100. Picture picture of the scenery outside the car window.

✓ Yes, I have over 100 pictures of the scenery outside the car window.

Incorrect pronoun 'it' and repetition 'Picture picture' cause grammatical errors. Use the plural noun 'pictures' with the quantifier 'over 100' and remove redundant words. Also place the quantifier before the noun.

× Because I like kissing your memory.

✓ Because I like keeping memories.

The phrase 'kissing your memory' is incorrect and nonsensical in this context. Likely intended 'keeping memories' or 'preserving memories.' Use verbs and nouns that convey the intended meaning; avoid literal translations.

× Well, I prefer the mountains because they help me feel relaxed and close to nature.

✓ Well, I prefer the mountains because they help me feel relaxed and close to nature.

This sentence is grammatically correct. No change needed. It uses correct pronouns and verb forms.

× For the same hiking in the hill huge cleanse my minds and make makes me feel more peaceful.

✓ For the same reason, hiking in the hills clears my mind and makes me feel more peaceful.

Multiple issues: missing connector 'for the same reason', wrong noun plurality 'hill' -> 'hills', incorrect verb forms 'huge cleanse my minds' and duplicated 'make makes'. Correct structure uses 'clears my mind' (singular) and 'makes me feel'. Also ensure articles and word order are natural.