Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more natural. Start with a direct topic sentence (Yes/No and reason), avoid unclear phrases like “draw bubble” and repetition, and keep it under 4–5 concise sentences. Use linking words (because, so, and) and give a specific example of what you notice. Also correct collocations: say “look out of the window,” “enjoy the scenery,” and “it leaves a strong impression.”

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy the changing scenery. For example, I like watching the countryside and houses pass by because it feels peaceful and I notice small details like gardens and street markets. Because of that, I often remember the atmosphere of the trip long after it ends.

Gợi ý: Good direct answer and reason, but make it more natural and concise. Use better phrasing: “save photos on my phone,” “look back on them,” and include a specific detail (e.g. types of scenes you photograph). Use a linking word (so/which) and keep it to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the window because I can save them on my phone and look back on them later. For instance, I like capturing colourful sunsets or interesting buildings so I can remember particular places from the trip.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and avoid repetition and small grammar mistakes. Say “I prefer the sea because it helps me relax” and explain specifically how (walking on the beach, listening to waves). Use linking words (because, so) and correct articles/word order (“the atmosphere is fresh”). Keep it to 2–3 clear sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because it helps me relax and unwind. For example, walking along the beach and listening to the waves makes me feel calm, and the fresh sea air is very refreshing.

× Actually, I usually look out the window when I draw bubble by bus or car because it is a impression to look at the view by the scenery.

✓ Actually, I usually look out the window when I travel by bus or car because it is an impressive sight to see the scenery.

Errors: 'draw bubble' is incorrect verb phrase; likely meant 'travel'. 'a impression' uses incorrect article before a word starting with a vowel sound and wrong noun form; should be 'an impressive sight' or 'an impression' is odd. 'the view by the scenery' is awkward; use 'see the scenery'. Suggestion: use correct verbs (travel), correct articles ('a' vs 'an') and choose appropriate noun/adjective combinations ('an impressive sight' or 'an impression'). Grammar problem type ID:17

× I can admire the beauty, the beauty and the atmosphere because it is very breathtaking.

✓ I can admire the beauty and the atmosphere because they are breathtaking.

Errors: Repetition 'the beauty, the beauty' is redundant. 'it is very breathtaking' uses singular pronoun 'it' for plural nouns; use plural 'they are'. Also 'very breathtaking' is unnecessary intensifier; 'breathtaking' suffices. Suggestion: remove repetition and ensure pronoun agrees with plural antecedents. Grammar problem type ID:13

× I usually do it because I can keep the photo in my memories in my phone, so I can sometimes look back at it and think about the trip that I have gone.

✓ I usually do it because I can keep the photos in my phone memories, so I can sometimes look back at them and think about the trips I have taken.

Errors: 'keep the photo in my memories in my phone' is awkward; use 'keep the photos in my phone memories' or 'save photos on my phone'. 'look back at it' uses singular while referring to multiple photos; use 'them'. 'the trip that I have gone' is incorrect past participle usage; use 'the trips I have taken' or 'the trip I went on'. Suggestion: use correct plural forms and past participle 'taken' for completed experiences. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I actually like both, but if I have to choose, I would like to choose the sea because I can relax in the ocean.

✓ I actually like both, but if I have to choose, I would choose the sea because I can relax by the ocean.

Errors: Redundancy 'would like to choose' should be 'would choose' in conditional. 'relax in the ocean' suggests being physically in water; more natural is 'relax by the ocean' or 'relax at the seaside'. Suggestion: simplify conditional form and choose appropriate preposition ('by' or 'at'). Grammar problem type ID:7

× In the sightseeing by the sea I I think the at the atmosphere is really fresh and relaxing.

✓ When sightseeing by the sea, I think the atmosphere is really fresh and relaxing.

Errors: Typo 'I I'; extra 'the' before 'atmosphere' is incorrect. 'In the sightseeing' is unnatural; use 'When sightseeing'. Suggestion: remove duplicate words, correct article usage, and use natural phrasing for actions (when + -ing). Grammar problem type ID:26