Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and incorrect word forms (e.g. “go do look”, “mesmerizing” used incorrectly). Use linking words like “because” or “so” only once to connect ideas. Keep the response to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I find the changing scenery calming. For example, I enjoy watching rural landscapes and small towns pass by, which helps me relax and think. So I usually spend most of the journey observing the view.

Gợi ý: The answer is unclear and does not respond to the question. Give a direct yes/no or short explanation. If you sometimes take photos, say when and why. Use one or two supporting details and keep it natural.

Ví dụ: Sometimes I do. If I see an especially beautiful view or an interesting scene, I will quickly take a photo with my phone to remember it later.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and clearly: state your preference in the first sentence, then give specific reasons with correct vocabulary and grammar. Avoid redundant phrases and incomplete sentences. Use linking words such as “because” and “for example” to organize reasons, and limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea to the mountains because I enjoy beach activities and relaxing by the water. For example, I like building sandcastles, swimming, and playing beach games with friends, which I can’t do in the mountains.

× Yes, I do go do look out of the window while travelling because the scenery outside seems to be quite fascinating and interesting and during travelling I would like to explore around the ambience because it makes me mesmerizing and refresh my mind and moreover the outside environment seems quite peaceful.

✓ Yes, I do look out of the window while travelling because the scenery outside seems quite fascinating and interesting. During travel I like to take in the atmosphere because it mesmerizes me and refreshes my mind; moreover, the outside environment seems quite peaceful.

Errors: redundant verbs and incorrect participle use ('do go do look' is redundant and ungrammatical), incorrect adjective/verb form ('makes me mesmerizing' should be active verb 'mesmerizes me'), and missing subject-verb agreement ('refresh my mind' should be 'refreshes my mind'). Suggestion: Remove redundant auxiliary verbs and use a single correct verb phrase ('do look' or simply 'look'). Use correct verb forms: 'mesmerizes' (verb) not 'mesmerizing' as predicate, and ensure subject-verb agreement with singular subject 'it'/'the scenery' so use 'refreshes'. Also split the long run-on sentence into shorter sentences for clarity.

× Call.

✓ No, I don't usually take photos.

Error: 'Call' is not an appropriate or complete answer; it is a fragment and does not fit the question. Suggestion: Provide a complete sentence that answers the question, for example 'No, I don't usually take photos' or 'Yes, sometimes I take photos.' Ensure the response matches the intended meaning.

× Mostly I would prefer only see because sea provides me to play different games even I can build sand castles over there and play with my years and dear Sir.

✓ Mostly I would prefer the sea because it allows me to play different games; I can even build sandcastles there and play with my friends.

Errors: Incorrect or missing articles ('the sea' not just 'see'), wrong verb patterns ('provides me to play' is ungrammatical), typo 'years' should be 'friends' or similar, and unnecessary address 'dear Sir' in spoken answer. Suggestion: Use correct noun and article ('the sea'), use appropriate verb constructions ('allows me to play' or 'I can play'), correct vocabulary ('sandcastles' as one word), and replace unclear word 'years' with 'friends' or 'family' depending on intended meaning.

× Therefore if I would have to choose one out of these two mountains and see then I will pick a sea only as the sea also gives you other activities like you can even.

✓ Therefore, if I had to choose between the mountains and the sea, I would choose the sea because it offers many activities you can enjoy.

Errors: Incorrect conditional form ('if I would have to' should be 'if I had to' for hypothetical), wrong nouns ('see' should be 'sea'), awkward phrasing ('pick a sea only'). Suggestion: Use the correct second conditional form for hypothetical choices: 'If I had to choose... I would choose...'. Use 'between' for choices of two items and complete the clause describing activities rather than leaving it unfinished.