Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct small grammar errors. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition ("especially" twice), and fix verb forms and article use ("take pictures", "the orange hues"). Add one specific supporting detail using a linking word to explain why you enjoy sunset views.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out the window when I travel, especially at sunset because the sky shows beautiful orange hues. For example, last week I stopped at a viewpoint to photograph the layered colors and clouds, which made the drive feel more relaxing and memorable.

Gợi ý: Make your response more structured and correct tense/parallelism. Start with a direct answer, use linking words (however, although), and avoid contradictory fragments. Keep it to two or three sentences with a clear reason and one specific example.

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes take photos of the view from the car; however, I usually try to enjoy the scene without my phone. For instance, if the light or composition is special, I will quickly snap a photo, but otherwise I focus on the moment.

Gợi ý: Give a concise direct answer and then contrast the two choices with clearer, natural language and specific reasons. Avoid repeating phrases and abstract words like "reflects greatness" — use concrete descriptors and a linking word (for example, whereas, while).

Ví dụ: I like both, but for different reasons: I prefer the mountains for their dramatic views and sense of adventure, whereas I like the sea for its calmness and wide horizon that helps me relax.

× I like to grab my phone and take picture of that because the gradient in colors, in orange colors specifically, is with is amazing and magnificent.

✓ I like to grab my phone and take pictures of it because the gradient of colors, especially the orange tones, is really amazing and magnificent.

The sentence has several issues: 'take picture' should be plural 'take pictures' (count noun with plural needed) — this is a singular and plural issue but corrected here under verb + -ing context for the verb phrase; 'gradient in colors' should be 'gradient of colors' (preposition choice) and 'in orange colors' is awkward — 'especially the orange tones' is clearer. Also 'is with is amazing' is ungrammatical and should be 'is really amazing'. Suggestion: use 'take pictures' for repeated/photo actions, use 'gradient of' for relationships, and avoid redundant words; keep verb forms simple and correct word order. Note: The instruction limited corrections to listed types; the main fix involved changing noun number and preposition and removing extra 'is', and smoothing adjective placement.

× Yes, I do take photos of the scenery outside the car window, Although I like to enjoy the scene instead of grabbing my phone and take pictures.

✓ Yes, I do take photos of the scenery outside the car window, although I like to enjoy the scene instead of grabbing my phone and taking pictures.

Parallel structure requires matching verb forms after 'instead of': use the gerund 'taking' rather than base form 'take'. Also 'Although' after a comma should be lowercase 'although'. Suggestion: use gerunds after prepositions like 'instead of' and ensure consistent verb forms for clarity.

× But yeah, often I do grab my phone and continue enjoying the scene.

✓ But yeah, often I do grab my phone and continue enjoying the scene.

This sentence is grammatically acceptable; 'continue enjoying' correctly uses the -ing form after 'continue'. No change needed. Explanation: after 'continue' use the gerund to indicate an ongoing action.

× I do prefer the mountains because it reflects greatness and I do prefer the sea because it reflects depth and I like both characteristics.

✓ I prefer the mountains because they reflect greatness, and I prefer the sea because it reflects depth; I like both qualities.

'Mountains' is plural and requires the plural pronoun and verb 'they reflect' rather than 'it reflects' (subject-verb agreement). Also 'do prefer' is acceptable but unnecessary; simplifying to 'prefer' is more natural. 'Characteristics' can be replaced with 'qualities' for clarity. Suggestion: match verb and pronoun number with the subject and prefer simpler verb forms unless emphasizing.