Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course, I look out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or car because I think it's a good time to relaxed our mood and look some scenery.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
Thí sinh
MMM yes of course. If I think the scenery is so pretty, I always choose take photos because it's very good way to record the. Uh, scenery.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
Thí sinh
Umm, I prefer to, uh, the mountains, uh, because I always go to, I always climb the mountain and uh, uh, looks the scenery. I think, uh, when I uh, go to the top of the mountain, I always can see the sunlight or sunshine.
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然简洁,注意语法和时态一致。避免重复表达(如 "look out the window" 与 "look some scenery"),并把观点放在第一句,然后用一两句补充原因或例子。注意单复数与形容词/动词形式(relaxed → relax/relaxing)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I'm travelling by bus or car because it's a relaxing way to pass the time. For example, on my commute I like watching the changing buildings and trees, which helps me unwind.
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 减少语气词和犹豫(例如 "MMM"、"uh"),句子要连贯且语法正确。用更自然的动词短语("take photos" 或 "photograph"),并给出具体例子或频率来丰富内容。避免句子中断("record the. Uh, scenery")。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos from the car if the view looks nice. For instance, when I see colorful fields or interesting buildings, I quickly take a few pictures to keep as memories.
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接明了,减少重复和填充词("uh", "umm")。用一到两句说明偏好并给出具体原因或例子。注意动词形式("climb the mountain" 可改为 "go hiking" 或 "climb mountains"),语言更地道。
Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking and the views from the top. For example, after a climb I like watching the sunrise and feeling the fresh air, which feels very peaceful.
× Yes, of course, I look out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or car because I think it's a good time to relaxed our mood and look some scenery.
✓ Yes, of course, I look out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or car because I think it's a good time to relax our mood and look at some scenery.
句中需要使用動詞不定式或動名詞形式來表示動作。原句中使用了過去分詞/形容詞形式“relaxed”而不正確,正確應為動詞原形“relax”以配合“a good time to + 動詞原形”的結構;此外“look some scenery”缺少介詞“at”,應為“look at some scenery”。建議多練習固定搭配,如“a good time to do sth.”和“look at sth.”。
× MMM yes of course. If I think the scenery is so pretty, I always choose take photos because it's very good way to record the. Uh, scenery.
✓ Mm yes, of course. If I think the scenery is so pretty, I always choose to take photos because it's a very good way to record the scenery.
“choose”後面需要接不定式“to take”而不是直接接動詞原形;“very good way”前需加不定冠詞“a”;“record the. Uh, scenery.”中“the”多餘且句子斷開,應合成“record the scenery”。建議記住動詞搭配,如“choose to do sth.”,並注意冠詞使用和連貫表達。
× Umm, I prefer to, uh, the mountains, uh, because I always go to, I always climb the mountain and uh, uh, looks the scenery. I think, uh, when I uh, go to the top of the mountain, I always can see the sunlight or sunshine.
✓ Umm, I prefer the mountains because I always go and climb the mountain and look at the scenery. I think when I go to the top of the mountain, I can always see the sunlight.
原句中“I prefer to, uh, the mountains”結構不完整,應為“I prefer the mountains”或“I prefer to go to the mountains”;“looks the scenery”主語與動詞不一致且缺少介詞,應為“I ... look at the scenery”;“I always can see”語序較不自然,常用“I can always see”。“sunlight”與“sunshine”二詞都可用,但只需一個,選擇“sunlight”。建議注意動詞與主語的一致性、介詞搭配以及自然語序(助動詞+副詞位置)。