Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Используйте правильную грамматику и простую, естественную структуру предложения. Избегайте повторений («with my loved ones with my family») и ошибок в формах глаголов («lookout» → «look out»). Дайте чёткое топик‑предложение и одну конкретную деталь или пример. Также свяжите идеи связкой (for example / for instance).

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by car. For example, last year I drove through Egypt with my family and I spent most of the journey watching the passing landscapes and talking with them.

Gợi ý: Исправьте неправильные или малоизвестные слова («mobiliograph» неуместно). Будьте конкретнее: укажите, что вы фотографируете, и почему это вам нравится. Уберите междометия («uh») и постройте связное объяснение с одной причиной и примером.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos from the car window, especially of landscapes and old buildings. I do this because photography helps me remember trips and the calm views often relax me; for instance, I photographed a desert sunset during a family trip last summer.

Gợi ý: Отвечайте прямо на вопрос (горы или море) и избегайте путаницы между «alone» и «with my family». Дайте одну причину выбора и один конкретный пример. Используйте связки (because / although / however) для ясности.

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because I find hiking and fresh air more relaxing than the busy seaside. For example, I usually go to a nearby mountain town with my family to hike and enjoy quiet evenings.

× I absolutely enjoy lookout the window at the scenery when I travel by car, especially with my loved ones with my family.

✓ I absolutely enjoy looking out of the window at the scenery when I travel by car, especially with my family.

The verb 'enjoy' must be followed by a verb in the -ing form, so 'lookout' is incorrect; it should be 'looking out'. Also 'look out the window' requires the preposition 'out of' or 'out' plus 'the window'. 'Loved ones with my family' is redundant; use 'my family'. Suggestions: after 'enjoy' use the gerund 'looking'; use 'out of the window' or 'out the window'; avoid redundant phrases.

× So I had a one movement that I was in Egypt with my family and this travel was by car and also I look out the window.

✓ I remember one moment when I was in Egypt with my family; we travelled by car and I looked out of the window.

The original sentence has awkward structure and tense inconsistency. 'I had a one movement' is ungrammatical; use 'I remember one moment' or 'I had a moment'. Use past tense 'was' and 'travelled' consistently, and 'looked' (past) instead of 'look'. Use 'by car' after 'travelled' and 'out of the window' for correct preposition. Suggestions: use clear connectors like 'I remember' and keep verbs in the same past tense for a past narrative.

× So I am a mobiliograph and I really enjoy taking photos of the scenery outside the car window.

✓ I am a mobile photographer and I really enjoy taking photos of the scenery outside the car window.

The word 'mobiliograph' is not English; the correct term is 'mobile photographer' or 'mobile photographer' meaning someone who photographs with a mobile phone. 'Mobile photographer' uses correct nouns. Suggestions: use established English terms; if you mean 'photographer who uses a mobile phone' say 'mobile photographer' or 'I take photos with my phone'.

× I really appreciate this work, uh, because I find relaxing landscapes with my family.

✓ I really enjoy this activity because I find the landscapes relaxing when I am with my family.

'Appreciate this work' is odd for a hobby; 'enjoy this activity' fits better. 'I find relaxing landscapes with my family' is ungrammatical: you 'find the landscapes relaxing' and you 'are with your family'. Reorder and use adjective 'relaxing' to modify 'landscapes'. Suggestions: use subject + find + object + adjective pattern ('I find the landscapes relaxing') and place time/condition phrases ('when I am with my family') appropriately.

× It's widely believed that mountain is important to relax, but I would say that when I am alone, I prefer the city to relax my mind, especially with my family.

✓ It's widely believed that the mountains are good for relaxation, but I would say that when I am alone I prefer the city to relax my mind.

Countable nouns like 'mountain' need an article or plural form; use 'the mountains' or 'mountains'. Also 'important to relax' is unnatural; use 'good for relaxation'. 'Especially with my family' contradicts 'when I am alone' and was removed. Ensure consistency of meaning. Suggestions: use correct article/plural for geographical nouns ('the mountains' or 'mountains') and avoid contradictory clauses.