Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
Thí sinh
I think yes, when I going by bus or car I like reading a book, sometimes listening to music, hmm sometimes I can't. Sleeping in your car that has the time.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like taking photos and when I go buy a car or a bus I take a photo outside.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
Thí sinh
I think I prefer both because I like in summer time swimming in a sea. In spring or autumn time I I like go to the mountain hiking because it give.
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Сформулируйте ответ прямо и грамотно: начните с четкого утверждения, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных детали. Избегайте лишних пауз и грамматических ошибок (например, использование правильных форм глаголов и местоимений). Свяжите идеи связующими словами (for example, but, however).
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. For example, on long journeys I enjoy watching the changing landscape, but sometimes I read or listen to music if I want to relax.
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Отвечайте конкретно и грамматически правильно: сначала да/нет, затем объяснение с примерами. Избегайте неправильных слов и выражений (например, "go buy a car or a bus"). Добавьте логическую связку, чтобы объяснение звучало плавнее.
Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery from the car window, especially when I see interesting landscapes. For instance, I always photograph sunsets or unusual buildings during trips.
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Дайте ясный выбор и кратко объясните причины с конкретными деталями. Исправьте грамматические ошибки (времена, артикли, повторы) и завершайте мысль полностью. Используйте связки (for example, because, while) чтобы показать контраст.
Ví dụ: I prefer both, depending on the season. For example, I like the sea in summer because I enjoy swimming, while in spring and autumn I prefer the mountains for hiking and fresh air.
× I think yes, when I going by bus or car I like reading a book, sometimes listening to music, hmm sometimes I can't.
✓ I think so. When I go by bus or car I like reading a book and sometimes listening to music, but sometimes I can't.
The sentence uses incorrect present tense form 'going' instead of the base verb 'go' after 'when'. Also 'I think yes' is unnatural; 'I think so' is idiomatic. Commas should be used to join ideas more clearly and add a contrasting conjunction 'but' before 'sometimes I can't'. Suggestion: use the simple present for habitual actions (I go, I like) and connect clauses with conjunctions for clarity.
× Sleeping in your car that has the time.
✓ Sometimes I fall asleep in the car when I have the time.
The original phrase has incorrect word order and unclear preposition use ('in your car that has the time'). We need 'in the car' (definite article) and 'when I have the time' to express the condition. Suggestion: use 'fall asleep' to describe sleeping unintentionally and place time condition after the main clause.
× Yes, I like taking photos and when I go buy a car or a bus I take a photo outside.
✓ Yes, I like taking photos, and when I travel by car or bus I take photos of the outside scenery.
The phrase 'when I go buy a car or a bus' is incorrect: 'go by car' or 'travel by bus' use correct verbs and prepositions. 'Take a photo outside' is vague; 'take photos of the outside scenery' is clearer. Use gerund 'taking photos' is fine; adjust surrounding verbs to correct forms.
× I think I prefer both because I like in summer time swimming in a sea.
✓ I think I prefer both because I like swimming in the sea in summer.
Simple present 'I like swimming' is correct for habits. The phrase 'in summer time' should be 'in summer' and 'a sea' is incorrect; 'the sea' is used when referring to the sea in general. Word order adjusted for natural English: 'swimming in the sea in summer.'
× In spring or autumn time I I like go to the mountain hiking because it give.
✓ In spring or autumn I like going to the mountains for hiking because it is relaxing.
Multiple errors: double 'I I', incorrect verb form 'like go' should be 'like going' (verb + -ing after 'like'), 'the mountain' should be plural 'the mountains' or 'the mountain' with article consistency, and sentence ends incomplete 'because it give' — needs a complement such as 'because it is relaxing' or 'because it gives me peace.' Suggestion: use 'like doing' + plural where appropriate and finish the clause with a clear adjective or noun phrase.