Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: حاول أن تبدأ بإجابة مباشرة ومختصرة ثم تضيف تفاصيل داعمة مترابطة. تجنّب التكرار والأخطاء النحوية مثل تركيب الجمل ("most of our trips we shared together we play games") واملأ الفجوات بالروابط (for example, because, so). كذلك قلل من الكلمات الملغية (uh, um) وحافظ على طول الجواب أقل من 5 جمل.

Ví dụ: I usually don't look out of the window because I spend the journey talking and playing games with my family. For example, on most trips we chat or play card games together, so I hardly notice the passing scenery.

Gợi ý: ابدأ بجملة واضحة تُجيب عن السؤال مباشرة. تجنّب التردد اللفظي (uh, um) والتكرار، وصغ الجمل بشكل نحوي صحيح ("I don't always have time"، "pictures taken from the window can be beautiful"). أضف سببًا محددًا أو مثالًا موجزًا ليدعم إجابتك.

Ví dụ: Not always, but I do take photos sometimes when the view is impressive. For example, I often photograph sunsets or interesting landscapes through the window because the light and perspective can make unique pictures.

Gợi ý: أجب مباشرة ثم قدّم أمثلة محددة وواضحة بدون كلمات مالئة. صحّح العبارات غير المفهومة (مثل "in front of the CC bank, ATI") واذكر أنشطة محددة تفعلها على الشاطئ. حافظ على جمل قصيرة ومترابطة باستخدام أدوات ربط مثل "because", "for example".

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because it helps me relax and recharge. For example, I like sitting on the sand, listening to the waves, and taking a short walk along the shore when I have free time.

× I usually don't look out a window because I spend time talking with my family for example, and most of our trips we shared together we play games so I hardly notice the scenery.

✓ I usually don't look out the window because I spend time talking with my family; for example, on most of our trips together we play games, so I hardly notice the scenery.

The sentence had plural/singular and article issues: 'a window' should be 'the window' because a specific window (the one on the bus or car) is implied. 'most of our trips we shared together' mixes tenses and is ungrammatical; use 'on most of our trips together' to show repeated occasions. Also punctuation and connectors were needed to clarify clauses. Suggestion: use 'the window' for specific reference, use 'on most of our trips together' to indicate frequency, and connect clauses with commas or semicolons. Grammar points: singular/plural and article usage; fix word order and tense consistency.

× I don't always have a time to uh, look out from a window, but uh, if I have a chance, I enjoy doing it.

✓ I don't always have time to look out the window, but if I have the chance, I enjoy doing it.

'a time' is incorrect here; use the uncountable noun 'time' without an article. 'from a window' is awkward; 'out the window' is natural in this context, and 'the chance' refers to a specific opportunity. Suggestion: remove the unnecessary article before 'time', use 'the window' for the specific window, and replace 'if I have a chance' with 'if I have the chance' for natural phrasing.

× Umm, because uh, uh, picture from out from the window of the car would be beautiful.

✓ A picture taken from the car window would be beautiful.

The original fragment 'because picture from out from the window of the car would be beautiful' is ungrammatical: it lacks a clear subject-verb structure and repeats prepositions ('from out from'). Use a noun phrase 'A picture taken from the car window' which correctly expresses the agent and source, followed by the modal 'would be' and adjective 'beautiful'. Suggestion: use 'taken from' to show how the picture is made and simplify prepositions.

× So I enjoy doing.

✓ So I enjoy doing that.

The verb phrase 'enjoy doing' needs an object or gerund phrase; 'doing' alone is incomplete. Add 'that' to refer to the previous action (taking pictures) or replace with 'So I enjoy it.' Suggestion: complete verb phrases by providing objects or pronouns.

× Of course, I prefer the sea because it is a place where I can feel relaxed and comfortable.

✓ Of course, I prefer the sea because it is a place where I can feel relaxed and comfortable.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no change needed. Keep third-person singular verbs like 'is' as they are.

× Uh, for example, uh, when I have time, I spend it in front of the CC bank, uh, ATI or uh, enjoy listening to the waves, uh, which, uh, give me energy and.

✓ For example, when I have time, I spend it in front of the sea, enjoying listening to the waves, which give me energy.

The original sentence is confused and contains unclear nouns ('CC bank, ATI') and a trailing 'and.' It needs a clear object 'the sea' instead of unclear terms. Use a gerund 'enjoying listening' to combine activities smoothly, and ensure the relative clause 'which give me energy' correctly follows the noun it modifies. Suggestion: remove filler words, clarify the location as 'the sea', use gerunds to combine actions, and avoid sentence fragments.