Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cần chú ý ngữ pháp và chia động từ (ví dụ: 'help' → 'helps'), làm câu ngắn gọn hơn và tránh lặp từ. Thêm liên từ hợp lý để câu mạch lạc hơn và giữ số câu không quá 5. Nên cung cấp một chi tiết cụ thể hơn về những “small details” để nội dung rõ ràng và phong phú hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always look out the window when I travel by bus or car because the scenery helps me relax and clear my mind. For example, I enjoy watching farmers at work and the changing colours of fields as we pass by.

Gợi ý: Cần sửa lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng, tránh lặp từ ('I I') và sử dụng cấu trúc đúng để diễn đạt ý muốn tận hưởng cảnh thay vì chụp ảnh. Dùng liên từ để nối ý và thêm một ví dụ cụ thể về lý do (ánh sáng rung khi xe chạy, muốn thư giãn...).

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't take photos from the car window because the images are often blurry and I prefer to enjoy the view. For instance, when the car is moving fast the photos turn out shaky, so I just watch and relax instead.

Gợi ý: Cần cải thiện phát âm và chọn từ chính xác (ví dụ: 'white flow flowers' → 'white wildflowers'; 'We have miracle' không rõ nghĩa). Nên tổ chức câu rõ ràng: đưa ra lý do chủ đề, dùng liên từ nếu mở rộng, và cung cấp mô tả cụ thể, hợp lý về hoạt động bạn làm ở núi.

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy the fresh air and peaceful scenery. For example, I often go hiking on forest trails where I can see white wildflowers and escape the city's noise.

× Absolutely, I always look out the window when I'm traveling by bus or car because the view help me relax and clear my mind.

✓ Absolutely, I always look out the window when I'm traveling by bus or car because the view helps me relax and clear my mind.

The subject 'the view' is singular, so the verb must be 'helps' in present simple. Use subject-verb agreement: singular noun requires third-person singular verb with -s. Suggestion: remember to add -s for he/she/it present simple verbs.

× I don't take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I I want to. I want to look out landscape and immerses.

✓ I don't take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I want to. I prefer to look at the landscape and immerse myself in it.

There are several issues: duplicate 'I', incorrect structure 'look out landscape', and wrong verb form 'immerses'. Correct structure uses 'prefer to look at' and reflexive 'immerse myself'. Also use base form 'immerse' with reflexive pronoun. Suggestion: remove duplicate words, use correct preposition 'look at', and use reflexive pronoun with 'immerse'.

× I prefer the mountains because I enjoy the fresh air and peaceful scenery.

✓ I prefer the mountains because I enjoy the fresh air and peaceful scenery.

This sentence is correct; no adjective/adverb errors. Keep as is.

× For example, I like hiking on forest trails and seeing white flow flowers.

✓ For example, I like hiking on forest trails and seeing white flowery plants.

The original 'white flow flowers' is ungrammatical: 'flow' is incorrect form. Use an adjective+noun combination like 'white flowers' or 'flowery plants'. The gerund 'seeing' is fine. Suggestion: choose correct adjective 'white' with noun 'flowers' or use 'flowery' as adjective.

× We have miracle and escape the city noise.

✓ We can experience a sense of wonder and escape the city's noise.

The phrase 'We have miracle' is unidiomatic and missing articles; 'escape the city noise' needs 'escape the city's noise' or 'escape from the city noise'. Correction adds appropriate nouns and possessive. Suggestion: use 'a sense of wonder' for 'miracle' meaning and use possessive 'city's noise'.