Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答自然且直接，表达到位。但可以更具体并使用连接词以增强连贯性与内容丰富度。建议加一两句具体细节（例如具体看到什么景色、何时看）并用连接词如“for example”或“also”衔接，使答案更有说服力且不冗长。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I'm on a bus or in a car, especially if I'm going somewhere new. For example, I enjoy watching changing landscapes like fields and old buildings, which helps me relax. Also, I sometimes notice small details such as people working in gardens, which makes the journey more interesting.

Gợi ý: 内容有情感和目的，但表达有语法和用词不够准确的地方，且略显冗长。建议简化句子结构，修正不自然的表达（如“feel as still in the trip”应改为“I feel as if I’m still on the trip”），并加一两个具体例子说明拍照的场景或目的。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the window, especially when I visit a new place or see something striking. I take them to remember details of the trip, such as a colourful market or a mountain view, and when I look back at these photos later I feel as if I'm still on the journey.

Gợi ý: 回答不够直接且有语法和用词问题（例如“I like to see more”不明确，“make your skin contact to the water”不自然）。建议先明确表态（mountains or sea），然后用一至两句具体理由和例子支持，使用连词如“because”或“so”来增强连贯性。用更自然的表达描述感受。

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I love swimming and relaxing on the beach. For example, in hot summer I enjoy wading into the seawater and feeling the cool water on my skin, which helps me unwind and cool down.

× I usually look out the window when I'm on a bus or in a car, especially if I'm going somewhere new.

✓ I usually look out of the window when I'm on a bus or in a car, especially if I'm going somewhere new.

句子中使用现在时态是正确的，但介词短语习惯用法应为 "look out of the window" 或简单说 "look out the window"（两者皆可）。这里将 "look out the window" 改为更标准的 "look out of the window" 以避免歧义。建议：在口语或书面中使用固定短语 "look out of the window" 或 "look out the window"，注意两种表达都可接受。

× Watching the scenery helps me relax and makes me feel good.

✓ Watching the scenery helps me relax and makes me feel good.

该句中使用现在分词作主语（Watching the scenery）是正确的，动词形式与主句一致，无需更改。这里标注为"动词现在分词形式"以遵循只检查清单中类型的要求，并解释无需修改。

× Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the window, especially when I travel somewhere new or see something interesting.

✓ Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the window, especially when I travel somewhere new or see something interesting.

句子结构与时态正确，"travel" 和 "see" 用一般现在时描述习惯动作是恰当的。此处呈现现在分词类目说明：无需修改。建议保持现在时描述习惯动作。

× I'd like to keep these pictures to remember every moment in a trip.

✓ I'd like to keep these pictures to remember every moment of a trip.

介词搭配错误，英语中常用短语是 "every moment of a trip" 而不是 "in a trip"。因此将介词 "in" 改为 "of"。建议：记住固定搭配，常用表达为 "moments of a trip/your life"。

× In this case, when the trip is over for a while, I feel as still in the trip every time I watch back for these pictures.

✓ After the trip is over for a while, I still feel as if I'm in the trip every time I look back at these pictures.

原句存在句子结构和搭配错误：1) "In this case" 用法不合适，改为更自然的 "After the trip is over for a while"；2) "I feel as still in the trip" 语序和表达不正确，应为 "I still feel as if I'm in the trip" 或 "I still feel like I'm on the trip"；3) "watch back for these pictures" 不地道，正确表达应为 "look back at these pictures"。建议：使用自然的时间连接词（after），使用固定表达 "feel as if" 或 "feel like" 表达假设感觉，记住动词搭配为 "look back at"。

× I like to see more.

✓ I like to see both more often.

原句单独 "I like to see more." 不清楚比较对象，句意模糊。题目问偏好山还是海，回答应明确对比/偏好。这里把表达改为更清晰的 "I like to see both more often." 如果学生想表达两者都喜欢，可以说 "I like to see both the mountains and the sea." 建议：面对选择题时明确指出对象或使用完整短语。

× It is enjoyable to put your body into the seawater and make your skin contact to the water in hot summer.

✓ It is enjoyable to put your body into the seawater and let your skin come into contact with the water in the hot summer.

原句中多个问题：1) 不定式和动词搭配问题，"make your skin contact to the water" 不符合英语搭配，应使用 "let your skin come into contact with the water" 或 "have your skin come into contact with the water"；2) 缺少定冠词 "the hot summer" 更自然；3) "put your body into the seawater" 可保留但更地道可说 "get into the sea"。建议：学习常用搭配如 "come into contact with"，注意定冠词的使用以及更自然的动词搭配（get into the sea / go into the seawater）。