Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid repeating words and use correct collocations (e.g., “relaxing and unwinding” or “help me relax”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or train because I find the changing scenery relaxing. For example, during a long journey I enjoy watching villages and fields pass by, which helps me unwind and forget about work for a while.

Gợi ý: Organize your response: give a direct answer, then a clear specific example. Remove hesitations and repetitions, use correct sentence structure and vocabulary (e.g., “photos of the scenery,” “animals,” “pretty houses”).

Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes I take photos of the scenery outside the window. For instance, when I see interesting animals or a pretty house, I quickly take a picture to remember the view.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting reasons, using linking words. Correct grammar and collocations (e.g., “wide mountains,” “a lot of trees,” “help me unwind”). Avoid filler words like “um” and “uh.”

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because they are wide and peaceful, and I can see a lot of trees which help me relax. For example, at Chinese New Year I often go hiking with my parents to enjoy the fresh air and quiet scenery.

× Yes, definitely. I like to look out the window when I'm traveling by long ride, bus or train.

✓ Yes, definitely. I like to look out of the window when I'm traveling on a long ride, by bus or train.

Use 'look out of the window' or 'look out the window' is acceptable but 'out of' is clearer; the preposition for transport is 'on a long ride' and 'by bus or train' is the correct preposition. Also add article 'a' before 'long ride' to be grammatically correct.

× I think it is relaxed and unwind.

✓ I think it is relaxing and helps me unwind.

'Relaxed' and 'unwind' are incorrect forms here. Use the adjective 'relaxing' to describe the experience and the verb phrase 'helps me unwind' to express that it causes relaxation. This fixes word form and collocation.

× Yes, there's a lot of photos in my it's related to the outside of the window.

✓ Yes, I have a lot of photos related to the view outside the window.

'There's a lot of photos' mixes singular contraction 'there's' with plural 'photos'—use 'I have a lot of photos' or 'there are a lot of photos'. Remove incoherent 'in my it's'. Reorder phrase to 'photos related to the view outside the window' for clarity.

× I I I sometimes would take the picture of the outside window about maybe the animal outlook or just a just a cute house.

✓ I sometimes take pictures through the window of animals I see or of a cute house.

Remove repeated fillers and unnecessary 'would' and 'about maybe'. Use plural 'pictures' for general habit. 'Through the window' is a clearer preposition, and 'animals I see' or 'a cute house' are concise noun phrases.

× Umm, actually I prefer the mountains because I like mountains wide and I can see a lot of tree which make me unwind.

✓ Umm, actually I prefer the mountains because I like wide open mountain areas and I can see a lot of trees which help me unwind.

'Mountains wide' is ungrammatical; use 'wide open mountain areas' or 'wide mountains'. 'A lot of tree' should be plural 'trees'. 'Which make me unwind' needs subject-verb agreement and natural phrasing: 'which help me unwind'.

× For example, uh, on Chinese New Year I usually climb mountain with my parents.

✓ For example, on Chinese New Year I usually climb a mountain with my parents.

Add article 'a' before 'mountain'. 'Climb mountain' is missing the article. Keep present simple 'usually climb' to indicate habitual action.