Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (articles, prepositions, word forms) and avoid awkward phrases like "bother myself" and "similar Rd." Use "on a familiar route" instead of "similar Rd."

Ví dụ: It depends on the route. If I'm on a familiar route, I usually don't look out the window, but when I'm visiting a new city I love to watch the scenery because it helps me get a sense of the place and inspires ideas for what to explore later.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and fix misunderstandings and grammar. Use a clear topic sentence (yes/no) and then give a specific reason and example. Avoid confusing pronouns and incorrect noun forms (e.g., "you" -> "the"; "cars window" -> "a car window"). Keep it concise.

Ví dụ: Not usually, but I sometimes take photos through a car window when the view is unusual or beautiful. For example, last winter I photographed a snow-covered village from the bus because the light and colors looked amazing.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion (mountains or sea) then support it with two specific, linked reasons. Correct word choice errors ("see" -> "sea", "sunbathing" as a verb/noun, grammar). Avoid repetition and keep to 2–4 sentences max.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I enjoy sunbathing and swimming in the summer. Also, beach destinations usually offer fresh seafood and relaxed cafés, which makes them perfect for a leisurely holiday.

× It really depends on where I am traveling by bus or car.

✓ It really depends on where I am traveling.

The phrase 'traveling by bus or car' is repetitive after 'where'; remove it to avoid redundancy and make the sentence more natural. Keep the verb tense present progressive for current or planned travel contexts.

× If I am traveling in a similar Rd. I wouldn't bother myself to look out from the window, but if I'm trying to a new city I will definitely gaze from the window to enjoy the view.

✓ If I am traveling on a familiar road, I wouldn't bother to look out of the window, but if I'm visiting a new city I will definitely gaze out of the window to enjoy the view.

Multiple issues: 'similar Rd.' is incorrect collocation and abbreviation; use 'familiar road'. Use 'on a road' not 'in'. 'Bother myself to look' is unidiomatic; use 'bother to look'. Preposition 'out of the window' or 'out the window' is correct. 'Trying to a new city' is wrong verb and structure; use 'visiting a new city'. Maintain conditional and future uses correctly.

× Well, I have never tried taking a photo of you through cars window, but now I'm thinking about it, it is a really creative idea to record the view.

✓ Well, I have never tried taking a photo through a car window, but now that I'm thinking about it, it is a really creative idea to record the view.

Errors: 'of you' is incorrect and likely unintended—remove it. Use singular 'a car window' or 'a car's window'; 'cars window' needs possessive. Use 'through a car window' as correct preposition. Add 'now that' for a natural connector and split the run-on sentence for clarity.

× Maybe if I have a chance next time I would try this technique out.

✓ Maybe if I have a chance next time I will try this technique out.

Modality: 'would' is used for hypothetical or conditional; since the speaker is talking about a likely future action, 'will' is more appropriate. Keep simple future for intention. No -ing form issue here except modal choice.

× Well, I definitely prefer to see because I can get sunbathing, which I enjoy to do often in the summer and there is a incredible view to enjoy while you're taking the sunbathing and enjoying delicious food.

✓ Well, I definitely prefer the sea because I can sunbathe, which I enjoy doing often in the summer, and there is an incredible view to enjoy while you sunbathe and eat delicious food.

Many errors: 'prefer to see' should be 'prefer the sea' (or 'the mountains'); 'get sunbathing' is incorrect—use 'sunbathe'. 'Enjoy to do' should be 'enjoy doing' (verb + -ing). 'A incredible' needs 'an' before vowel sound. 'Taking the sunbathing' is wrong; use 'you sunbathe'. Simplify list with parallel gerunds 'sunbathe and eat'.