Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and does not directly respond. Give a clear topic sentence answering the question, then add brief supporting detail using linking words. Use correct grammar and natural phrasing.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy seeing how the landscape changes. For example, I like watching fields and small towns pass by, and it helps me relax during long journeys.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but has grammar and clarity issues. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give a specific reason and an example. Use linking words (for example, because) and correct tense and word forms.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of scenery outside the car window because I love capturing memorable views. For example, when I visited America I took many landscape photos, and whenever I look at them I remember that trip clearly.

Gợi ý: Your response is very disorganized and hard to follow. Directly state your preference in one sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Keep sentences short and coherent and use correct vocabulary (mountains/sea, scenery, relax).

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains to the sea because I enjoy hiking and the peaceful atmosphere. For instance, on my days off I like to spend a couple of days walking in the hills and breathing fresh air, which helps me relax.

× And what you guys don't always do this? So revealing by just looking at it.

✓ Don't you guys always do that? It's relaxing to just look at the scenery.

The original contains incorrect word order and unclear phrasing. 'And what you guys don't always do this?' is ungrammatical; use inversion for questions ('Don't you...') and replace 'do this' with the pronoun 'that' referring to looking out the window. 'So revealing by just looking at it.' is not a complete clause and uses the wrong adjective; likely intended 'relaxing' meaning calming. Suggestion: form a proper question with auxiliary inversion and use complete clauses with appropriate adjectives.

× Yes I do, I have a bunch of scenery photo in America because I love to capture it.

✓ Yes, I do. I have a bunch of scenery photos from America because I love to capture them.

'A bunch of' requires plural noun: 'photos' not 'photo'. Use the preposition 'from' to indicate origin (from America). 'It' is incorrect because 'scenery photos' is plural, so use 'them'. Also add a period to separate sentences. Suggestion: match noun number to quantifier and use correct preposition and pronoun reference.

× There is just remind me every time that I look back in the photo, not the pair that I have been the 1st.

✓ They just remind me every time I look back at the photos; not the parts I took first.

Original uses 'There is' incorrectly and mixes singular/plural. 'There is just remind me' is ungrammatical; use 'They remind me'. 'Look back in the photo' should be 'look back at the photos'. 'Not the pair that I have been the 1st' is unclear—likely intended 'not the ones I took first' or 'not the parts I took first'. Use past participle 'taken' when saying 'the ones I took first' or 'the ones I had taken first'. Suggestion: clarify reference, use correct subject pronoun, and use 'look back at' for reviewing photos.

× People fold or see me to the mountains because I love the huge brown.

✓ People often take me to the mountains because I love the huge brown scenery.

The original 'fold or see me to the mountains' is garbled; likely 'often take me' is intended. 'Huge brown' is not a noun phrase; specify what is 'huge'—for example 'huge brown mountains' or 'huge brown scenery'. Also 'People' as a general subject may be fine but 'often' is the correct adverb. Suggestion: use correct verbs and complete noun phrases.

× The things are now, I mean the seafood.

✓ As for now, I mean the seafood.

'The things are now' is ungrammatical and unclear. To introduce a change of topic or clarification, use 'As for now' or 'At the moment'. 'The seafood' needs to be connected clearly. Suggestion: use transitional phrases to clarify meaning.

× So all the time. I love a day off. Take a couple days. I just find pretty soon.

✓ So all the time I love a day off and taking a couple of days; I just find it very refreshing.

The original is a series of fragments and lacks proper verb forms. 'I love a day off. Take a couple days.' should be combined and use gerund 'taking' or rephrase: 'I like taking a couple of days off.' 'I just find pretty soon' is ungrammatical; likely meant 'I just find it pretty relaxing' or 'refreshing'. Suggestion: combine fragments into complete sentences, use gerunds for activities ('taking') and add clear adjectives ('relaxing'/'refreshing').