Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No) then give one or two specific supporting details. Avoid hesitation and filler words, and use correct grammar (e.g. "if there is beautiful scenery" not "if there is a very, uh, good nature"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching landscapes pass by. For example, I like seeing green fields and small villages as they give me a sense of calm.

Gợi ý: Respond clearly and use a simple reason. Begin with a direct answer (No), then explain briefly with one clear reason and an example. Correct grammar: use "I'm not sure" or "I don't" appropriately, and say "because the car is moving" rather than awkward phrasing. Keep to two sentences max.

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually take photos from a moving car because it is unsafe and the pictures often turn out blurry. For instance, once I tried to photograph a sunset from a bus and the photos were unusable.

Gợi ý: Give a clear preference and support it with specific reasons or an example. Use correct comparative structure: "I prefer the mountains to the sea." Explain why (e.g. scenery, activities, calm) and avoid unclear phrases like "white collar." Use one or two supporting sentences with linking words such as "because" or "for example."

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains to the sea because I enjoy the fresh air and hiking there. For example, I like walking on mountain trails and seeing forests and peaks, which I find more relaxing than crowded beaches.

× Yeah. So, umm, in my situation, if there is a very, uh, good nature, uh, uh, of uh, uh, nature when we can see by using the windows or car, if there is no any legendary side, I'm not trying to this, uh.

✓ Yes. In my case, if there is beautiful scenery visible from the car window, I look out at it; if there is nothing notable, I do not.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure problems: fragments, filler words, and unclear clauses. This fits 'Sentence structure errors' because the ideas are not organized into grammatically complete sentences. Suggestion: remove fillers (umm, uh), combine related ideas into clear clauses, use correct noun phrases ('beautiful scenery') and prepositional phrases ('from the car window'), and use simple connectors ('if... then' or a semicolon) to join related thoughts.

× No, no, I'm not a sure at this time, uh, when I taking the photo, uh, of the, uh, outside the car of the window, uh, because of the when car is moving at this time and it will be different accident causes, causes the different accidents, so I'll not able to take up.

✓ No, I am not sure. When I am taking photos out of the car window while the car is moving, it can be dangerous and may cause accidents, so I am not able to take photos then.

The original uses incorrect verb forms and word order. 'When I taking' lacks the auxiliary 'am' needed for the present continuous ('am taking'). Also 'outside the car of the window' is incorrect prepositional order; use 'out of the car window'. Rephrase to clarify cause and effect: 'it can be dangerous and may cause accidents, so I am not able to take photos.' This addresses 'Verb in the present participle form' because the present participle must be used with appropriate auxiliary verbs.

× I prefer mountain rather than sea because mountain is very beautiful and which are especially being a white collar because in white collar the mountain are look attractive and I think it will be.

✓ I prefer the mountains to the sea because mountains are very beautiful; they are often covered in white snow, which makes them look attractive.

The original has quantifier and article errors: singular/plural mismatch ('mountain' vs 'mountains'), incorrect comparative structure ('prefer X rather than Y' is better as 'prefer X to Y'), and unclear phrase 'white collar' which likely meant 'white snow' or 'white cover'. This fits 'Incorrect use of quantifiers' because number agreement and quantifying words are misused. Suggestions: use plural when speaking generally ('mountains'), use 'prefer X to Y', and clarify descriptive phrases ('covered in white snow').