Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often look outside with the window to see the scenery.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always take photo of the scenery on silent car window to capture the sightseeing. I like it and.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
Thí sinh
It's difficult to choose because I love mountain and sea bows, so I can choose it.
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、直接,并补充具体细节。注意语法(如介词和短语搭配)和句子流畅性。可以使用一到两句支持细节并用连接词衔接。比如说明何时看、看什么类型的景色、感受等。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching passing landscapes. For example, I often notice old houses and green fields on the way to my hometown.
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
Điểm: 48.0Gợi ý: 回答存在语法错误、不自然的短语(“silent car window” 不恰当)和不完整句子。应使用正确名词复数、动词形式,并补充具体情景(什么时候、用什么设备、为什么)。保持不超过五句并用连接词。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos from the car window to capture interesting views. I usually use my phone to photograph colorful fields and old buildings because I want to remember the trip.
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊且有词汇错误(“sea bows” 不清楚),句子结构不自然。应直接表明偏好或说无法决定并给出具体原因或比较,使用连接词如 'because' 或 'on the other hand' 来组织句子。
Ví dụ: I find it hard to choose because I enjoy both for different reasons: I love the mountains for hiking and fresh air, but I like the sea for relaxing on the beach and watching sunsets.
× Yes, I often look outside with the window to see the scenery.
✓ Yes, I often look out of the window to see the scenery.
句中介词用错。英语中表示从窗户向外看的常用短语是 look out of the window 或 look out the window,而不是 with the window。建议记住固定搭配:look out of the window / look out the window 用于“从窗外看”。
× Yes, I always take photo of the scenery on silent car window to capture the sightseeing. I like it and.
✓ Yes, I always take photos of the scenery through the car window to capture the views. I enjoy it.
句中存在多处错误: 1) 可数名词 photo 单数/复数与数量不匹配,应使用复数 photos(或加上不定冠词 a photo)。 2) 介词短语“on silent car window”不自然且含义不明,表示通过车窗拍照应使用 through the car window。silent 不是必要描述,且位置不正确。 3) sightseeing 用法不当,sightseeing 表示“观光”作名词或动词短语的一部分,capture the views 更自然。 4) 末尾句子残缺“I like it and.”应改为完整句 I enjoy it 或 I like doing that。建议:注意可数名词复数形式与正确介词搭配,并保证句子完整。
× It's difficult to choose because I love mountain and sea bows, so I can choose it.
✓ It's difficult to choose because I love mountains and the sea, so I can't decide.
句中有复数/单数错误和词语使用错误: 1) mountain 应使用复数 mountains 来表示“山”这类景物的泛指。 2) sea 前面通常不加复数,使用 the sea 表示“大海”。 3) 原句用 sea bows 非常不自然,似为误拼或误用,应删除。 4) 句尾 so I can choose it 逻辑错误,应为 so I can't decide(我无法决定)。建议:注意可数名词的单复数用法,使用固定短语 the sea,以及表达不能决定用 can't decide。