Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Говорите яснее и грамотно: начните с прямого утверждения, затем добавьте одно-два конкретных уточнения. Избегайте неуместных слов и ошибок в форме глаголов. Используйте связки (for example, because, so) чтобы логично развить мысль. Одна-две короткие расширяющие фразы будут достаточно.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I enjoy watching passing landscapes because they feel new and exciting to me. For example, I like seeing rural areas and small towns I have never visited before.

Gợi ý: Используйте правильные времена и последовательность слов: начните с простого ответа, затем приведите конкретный пример. Уточняйте, что именно вас привлекает (цвета, архитектура, необычные места) и почему. Старайтесь избегать повторов и ошибок в формах глаголов (saw → seen, interested → interesting/interest).

Ví dụ: Yes, I do, if something catches my eye. I usually take photos of unusual buildings or colourful shops that I don't have in my town. For instance, last month I photographed a small street market with bright signs and handcrafted goods.

Gợi ý: Дайте чёткий ответ сразу, затем объясните причину и приведите пример. Избегайте слов-паразитов (umm) и неправильных слов (potted town). Используйте слова, связанные с природой (mountains, sea, scenery, fresh air) и стройте короткие корректные предложения.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I grew up near the coast and feel comfortable there. The sea relaxes me with its sound and fresh air, and I enjoy walking along the beach at sunset.

× Yes, sometimes watch outside from bus or curve because it makes me injured like I'm growing the under the world or under the place that I've never been to.

✓ Yes, sometimes I watch outside from the bus or car because it makes me feel like I'm discovering a world or a place I've never been to.

The sentence has multiple structure and grammar issues: missing subject 'I' before 'watch', wrong word 'curve' instead of 'car', incorrect verb 'injured' used instead of 'feel', and awkward phrase 'growing the under the world'. Also articles are missing ('the bus or car') and relative phrase order is incorrect. To improve: always include the subject with verbs, choose correct vocabulary (car not curve; feel not injured), use articles where needed, and simplify the metaphor ('discovering a world') for clarity.

× If something interested, yes.

✓ If something interests me, yes.

The verb form 'interested' is incorrect here. The correct present simple form 'interests' is needed because the condition refers to a general present situation. Also a subject 'me' after 'interests' clarifies meaning. For improvement: use present simple for habitual or general truths and ensure subject-object structure ('something interests me').

× So when I see something that I've never saw or I feel that it's interesting, then I take a picture.

✓ So when I see something that I've never seen or I find interesting, I take a picture.

The past participle 'seen' is required after 'have' (present perfect), not 'saw' (simple past). Also 'I feel that it's interesting' is better expressed as 'I find it interesting' for naturalness. Improve by using correct perfect forms (have + past participle) and prefer concise verbs for opinions ('find').

× Sometimes it's interesting that there are some shops that are not in my town or my leisure.

✓ Sometimes it's interesting to see shops that are not in my town or places I don't usually visit in my free time.

This sentence is awkward and unclear: 'my leisure' is incorrect word choice and the clause structure is unnatural. Replace 'my leisure' with 'my free time' or rephrase to 'places I don't usually visit'. Keep sentence focus on what is interesting ('to see shops that...'). For improvement: use clear noun phrases for time ('free time') and maintain parallel structure.

× I prefer to see because I'm living in a potted town and I was born here and raised, so I'm more like, umm, get used to see that see.

✓ I prefer the sea because I live in a small town where I was born and raised, so I'm more used to seeing that scenery.

Problems: 'prefer to see' is incorrect phrase for preference between mountains and sea; use 'prefer the sea'. 'Potted town' is wrong word; use 'small town'. 'I was born here and raised' needs 'and raised here' or 'was born and raised here'. 'I'm more like, umm, get used to see that see' mixes tenses and forms; use 'I'm more used to seeing that scenery.' Improve by using correct collocations ('born and raised', 'used to doing') and consistent verb forms.

× And it's like, umm, one of the most of my favorite, uh, natures.

✓ And it's one of my favorite natural landscapes.

'One of the most of my favorite' is redundant and incorrect; say 'one of my favorite'. 'Natures' is incorrect countable noun here; use 'natural landscapes' or 'natural settings'. For improvement: avoid redundant modifiers and choose correct nouns to match meaning.