Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Сократите повторения и заполнители (uh, umm), постройте ответ в 2–3 чётких предложения: тема + 1–2 поддерживающих детали с связкой. Используйте более точную лексику (e.g. "look at the scenery" вместо "look at windows") и согласование глаголов ("I enjoy looking at the scenery").

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I enjoy looking at the scenery while travelling by bus or car because it helps me relax and imagine stories about the places I see. Also, I often listen to music at the same time, which enhances the experience.

Gợi ý: Избегайте неясных выражений («in a lower shade») и лишних междометий. Дайте прямой ответ («No, I don't any more» или «Sometimes I do») и объяснение причины с примером. Используйте связки (for example, however, so) для логики.

Ví dụ: Not much anymore. I used to photograph every beautiful view when I was a child, but now I prefer to enjoy the moment without taking pictures, because I find photos often don't capture what I feel. For example, on recent trips I only take photos when the view is exceptional.

Gợi ý: Начните с чёткого утверждения (I prefer the sea/the mountains). Избегайте неуклюжих фраз и ошибок ("I love seeing more than the mountains" неясно). Объясните причину и добавьте условие или пример. Используйте связки (because, but, however).

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I enjoy the sound of the waves and the relaxed atmosphere. I haven't visited many mountains, but I would love to try mountain hiking in the future if I have the chance.

× Definitely yes uh, I choose traveling by bus or car just because I love watching the view uh, on the window and just listening music and vibing uh, and making the scenes in my head.

✓ Definitely yes. I choose traveling by bus or car just because I love watching the view through the window, listening to music, vibing, and imagining scenes in my head.

The sentence required gerunds and correct verb + -ing constructions for parallel actions (watching, listening, vibing, imagining). Also use 'listening to music' (preposition 'to' with listen) and 'through the window' is the natural preposition. Ensure parallel structure when listing activities.

× I love watching the view uh, on the window and just listening music and vibing uh, and making the scenes in my head.

✓ I love watching the view through the window and listening to music while vibing and imagining scenes in my head.

Use 'through the window' not 'on the window'; use 'listening to music' with preposition 'to'; 'while' or commas help connect simultaneous actions. Maintain natural collocations.

× When I was little I used to take picture of every view that I umm, mentioned as beautiful, but as I get older I stop this hobby because I see everything umm in a lower shade.

✓ When I was little I used to take pictures of every view that I mentioned as beautiful, but as I got older I stopped this hobby because I saw everything in a dimmer light.

Maintain past tense consistently: 'used to' requires past verbs 'got' and 'stopped'. Plural 'pictures' needed. 'In a lower shade' is unnatural; 'in a dimmer light' or 'in a less vivid way' is idiomatic.

× When I was little I used to take picture of every view that I umm, mentioned as beautiful, but as I get older I stop this hobby because I see everything umm in a lower shade.

✓ When I was little I used to take pictures of every view that I mentioned as beautiful, but as I got older I stopped this hobby because I saw everything in a dimmer light.

Countable noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because 'every view' implies multiple instances. Also adjust surrounding verb forms to past tense for consistency.

× So that's why I'm enjoying uh, looking at windows and see the scenery.

✓ So that's why I enjoy looking out of windows and seeing the scenery.

Use simple present 'I enjoy' for habitual action rather than 'I'm enjoying'. Maintain parallel gerund forms 'looking' and 'seeing'. Use 'looking out of windows' or 'looking through windows' and 'seeing' matches 'looking'.

× Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?

✓ Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?

No correction needed. The sentence is grammatically acceptable; the definite article 'the' is correctly used with 'car window' when context implies a specific window.

× When I was little I used to take picture of every view that I umm, mentioned as beautiful, but as I get older I stop this hobby because I see everything umm in a lower shade.

✓ When I was little I used to take pictures of every view that I mentioned as beautiful, but as I got older I stopped this hobby because I saw everything in a dimmer light.

No past participle required beyond 'mentioned' which is correct here; main issue was tense consistency and plural noun. Use past simple forms for completed habitual actions in the past.

× I've heard this question many times and every time I answered that I love seeing more than the mountains.

✓ I've heard this question many times, and every time I answer that I prefer the sea to the mountains.

Use present simple 'I answer' for habitual responses after 'I've heard... many times'. Original 'I love seeing more than the mountains' is ungrammatical and unclear; 'prefer the sea to the mountains' is clear and idiomatic.

× I've heard this question many times and every time I answered that I love seeing more than the mountains.

✓ I've heard this question many times, and every time I answer that I prefer the sea to the mountains.

Use 'prefer X to Y' for comparisons. 'Love seeing more than the mountains' misuses comparison structure and prepositions; rephrase to express preference correctly.

× Firstly, I wasn't on mountains and that's not that shockable that I choose see but also I would travel to mountains if I had a chance.

✓ Firstly, I haven't been to the mountains, so it's not surprising that I haven't seen them, but I would travel to the mountains if I had the chance.

Correct sentence structure: use present perfect 'haven't been to the mountains' to indicate experience; 'that's not that shockable' is incorrect—use 'not surprising'. 'I choose see' is ungrammatical; clarify with 'I haven't seen them'. Use conditional 'if I had the chance' for hypothetical future travel.