Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: ① 文章の文法と語順のミスを直しましょう（例："when I'm traveling" のように動詞ing形の綴りと前置詞の使い方）。② 冗長な表現を減らし、より自然な接続語を使って文を整理しましょう（例えば"because"で長く続ける代わりに短い補足を付ける）。③ 名詞の単複同一致（"those scenery" → "the scenery" または "those scenes"）に注意しましょう。具体的には、最大5文で、主題文＋1〜2の支持文にまとめる練習をして下さい。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I usually look out of the window when I travel because the scenery inspires me. For example, I feel happy seeing different places and landscapes change as we move.

Gợi ý: ① 文法と語順の修正（"if someone drives me" や "when I'm riding in a car" など）。② 冠詞と複数形の使い方を直す（"taking photo" → "taking photos"、"the great moment" → "great moments" または "the great moment"）。③ 接続詞の使い分けで文を簡潔にし、情報を明確に伝える練習をして下さい。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do, especially when someone else is driving and I can relax. I often take photos of the scenery so I can remember special moments later.

Gợi ý: ① 文法の正確さ（"that's a very difficult question"、"easier" → 文脈的に"more convenient"など検討）を改善しましょう。② 動詞の過去分詞・不定詞の形（"to relaxed" → "to relax"）と名詞句の自然な表現（"the mountainous area" → OK）に注意。③ 理由と具体例を簡潔に述べる練習をし、接続語（"because", "so", "for example"）で論理を明確にしてください。

Ví dụ: That's a tough question, but I prefer the mountains. I live in a mountainous area, so it's easy for me to visit them, and on weekends I often climb nearby peaks to enjoy the spectacular views and relax.

× Definitely I do.

✓ Definitely, I do.

This sentence is acceptable but needs a comma after an introductory adverb for correct punctuation and natural flow. Add a comma after 'Definitely' to separate the introductory word from the clause.

× I often enjoy the view from the window when I'm in traveling because those scenery make me really inspired and fulfilling and makes me feel very happy to be in different places.

✓ I often enjoy the view from the window when I'm traveling because those scenes make me really inspired and fulfilled and make me feel very happy to be in different places.

Errors: 'in traveling' should be 'traveling' (incorrect preposition/phrase), 'those scenery' uses uncountable/incorrect noun form (scenery is uncountable; use 'scenes' or 'the scenery'), subject-verb agreement: 'those scenes make' and later 'and makes' should match subject 'those scenes' so use 'make'. 'fulfilling' is wrong form for the speaker's feeling; use 'fulfilled'. Suggestions: remove 'in', use plural 'scenes' or keep 'the scenery' and adjust verbs; ensure verb agreement and parallel structure.

× Yes I do if someone drive me and I'm riding on the car, I often enjoy taking photo of the scenery outside because I taking photos allow me to remember the very the great moment later.

✓ Yes I do. If someone drives me and I'm riding in the car, I often enjoy taking photos of the scenery outside because taking photos allows me to remember the great moments later.

Errors: run-on sentence and punctuation—split into sentences. 'someone drive me' needs third-person singular 'drives' (subject-verb agreement). 'riding on the car' uses wrong preposition; correct is 'riding in the car'. 'taking photo' should be plural 'taking photos'. 'I taking photos allow' is ungrammatical; use 'taking photos allows' with singular gerund subject. Remove extra 'the' before 'great moment' and pluralize 'moments' for generality. Suggestions: fix verb forms, prepositions, and sentence boundaries; ensure gerund verb agreement.

× Well, that's very difficult question, but I think I prefer the mountains because I live in the mountainous area right now and it's really easier for me to access mountains.

✓ Well, that's a very difficult question, but I think I prefer the mountains because I live in a mountainous area right now and it's much easier for me to access the mountains.

Errors: missing article 'a' before 'very difficult question'. 'the mountainous area' is too specific—use 'a mountainous area' unless a specific area is meant. 'it's really easier' is awkward; use 'it's much easier' or 'it is easier'. Also add 'the' before 'mountains' for clarity. Suggestions: add appropriate articles and choose suitable adverb ('much' instead of 'really') for comparative structures.

× On the weekends I often go to climb the nearest mountains to enjoy the spectacular views and to relaxed.

✓ On the weekends I often go to climb the nearest mountains to enjoy the spectacular views and to relax.

Error: 'to relaxed' uses past participle/adjective incorrectly; after 'to' (infinitive marker) use base form 'relax'. Suggestion: use the infinitive 'to relax' to match parallel structure with 'to enjoy'.