Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cải thiện rõ rệt về ngữ pháp và phát âm; tránh lặp từ; trả lời trực tiếp, mạch lạc với tối đa 3-4 câu. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng: 'Yes, I often look out the window.' (2) Giải thích ngắn gọn với lý do cụ thể: ví dụ 'because I enjoy seeing new places and it relaxes me.' (3) Dùng liên từ để nối ý (for example, because, so) và sửa cấu trúc như 'It helps me broaden my view' thay vì 'expanding the eyesight'. (4) Tránh tiếng lắp và từ lặp; luyện nói chậm, nghĩ trước câu chủ đề.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy seeing new places. For example, watching towns and countryside pass by helps me relax and gives me ideas for photography. So I usually spend most of the journey looking outside.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện tính tự nhiên và ngữ pháp, tránh lặp từ; làm rõ hơn bằng chi tiết cụ thể. Cụ thể: (1) Bắt đầu trực tiếp: 'Yes, I do.' (2) Kết hợp lý do và ví dụ cụ thể: nói rõ khi nào và bằng thiết bị gì (phone, camera). (3) Sử dụng cụm từ chính xác: 'a beautiful view' thay vì 'a beauty scenery' và 'to remember it' hoặc 'to keep the memory'. (4) Nối các mệnh đề bằng linking words như 'because' hoặc 'so' để logic hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. When I spot a beautiful view from the window, I usually take a photo with my phone to remember the moment. For instance, I often capture sunsets or unusual landscapes so I can look back at them later.

Gợi ý: Cải thiện cấu trúc câu, rõ ràng trong so sánh và dùng từ vựng chính xác. Cụ thể: (1) Trả lời trực tiếp với ý chính: 'I prefer...' hoặc 'I like both, but...' (2) So sánh rõ ràng bằng linking words: 'On the one hand... On the other hand...' (3) Dùng từ chính xác: 'mountains offer better views' và 'the sea lets you swim and relax'. (4) Tránh câu rời rạc và lặp, chia ý thành 2-3 câu ngắn gọn.

Ví dụ: That's a difficult choice because I like both. On the one hand, mountains offer beautiful views and peaceful hikes. On the other hand, the sea is great for swimming and relaxing, so I enjoy visiting the coast when I want to unwind.

× Uh, yes, I do because it's, it's very new for me.

✓ Uh, yes, I do because it's very new to me.

Use 'new to someone' rather than 'new for someone'. 'New to me' is the correct prepositional phrase to indicate that something is unfamiliar to the speaker.

× It's helps me to expanding the eyesight and I, I, I a person who very interested in a beautiful something beautiful.

✓ It helps me to expand my view, and I am a person who is very interested in beautiful things.

Several issues: 'It's helps' mixes contraction with third-person singular; use 'It helps'. After 'helps me to' use base verb 'expand', not '-ing' form. 'Eyesight' is not idiomatic here; 'view' or 'perspective' is better. 'I, I, I a person who very interested' misses the verb 'am' and requires 'is' after 'who'. 'a beautiful something beautiful' is ungrammatical; use 'beautiful things'. Suggestions: simplify clauses, use 'It helps me to expand my view' and include the verb 'am' in 'I am a person who is very interested in beautiful things.'

× So yeah.

✓ So yes.

This is more of a style choice than strict grammar: 'So yeah' is colloquial; in a test response 'So yes' is clearer and more formal. Keep answers concise.

× Of course, yes I do when I see when I see a beauty scenery outside, I always take a photo to keep this memorable.

✓ Of course, yes, I do. When I see a beautiful scene outside, I always take a photo to keep it as a memory.

Use 'beautiful' (adjective) with 'scene' (noun), not 'beauty scenery'. 'Scenery' is uncountable and typically used without 'a'. 'Keep this memorable' is awkward; use 'keep it as a memory' or 'keep it as a memento'. Also separate into two sentences for clarity and remove repeated phrase 'when I see'.

× Well, it's a hard question because mountains are all seas have a different of that beautiful well button is you can see the environment for much, but in the sea you can like to explore yourself with the with the water.

✓ Well, it's a hard question because mountains and the sea are different in their beauty. In the mountains you can see a lot of natural scenery, while at the sea you can explore yourself in the water.

This sentence had many problems: 'mountains are all seas have a different of that beautiful' is ungrammatical. Use 'mountains and the sea are different in their beauty.' 'You can see the environment for much' should be 'you can see a lot of natural scenery' or 'you can see more of the environment.' 'You can like to explore yourself with the with the water' should be 'you can explore yourself in the water' or 'you can explore by swimming.' Suggestions: split into clearer comparative sentences, use parallel structures 'In the mountains... while at the sea...' and choose appropriate verbs like 'see' and 'explore'.