Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition (e.g., "especially" used twice) and unnatural phrases like "the very great pleasure for me to do so."

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. For example, on bus trips I enjoy watching changing landscapes such as fields and small towns, which helps me relax and pass the time.

Gợi ý: Be more concise and precise. Begin with a direct answer, then explain why with a specific detail and use linking words to connect ideas. Avoid filler words ("uh") and vague phrases like "keep all the memory within myself."

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos from the bus window, especially of sunsets, because they create striking colors. Later I look at these pictures to remember the trip and share them with friends.

Gợi ý: Give a direct, fluent answer and add specific reasons. Use linking words (e.g., "because," "so") and avoid hesitation fillers ("umm," "uh"). Provide an example to make the preference concrete.

Ví dụ: I prefer both the mountains and the sea because each offers something different: the sea is calming with its waves, while mountains are refreshing and offer great hiking. For instance, I enjoy coastal areas with nearby hills where I can relax on the beach and later hike to enjoy panoramic views.

× The scenery from the window of the car or the bus is the very great pleasure for me to do so.

✓ The scenery from the window of a car or a bus is a great pleasure for me.

The original sentence uses awkward word order and incorrect article usage. 'The very great pleasure for me to do so' is unidiomatic. Use 'a car or a bus' (general reference) and 'a great pleasure for me' to express enjoyment. Also remove 'to do so' which is unnecessary.

× I love looking out the window whenever I'm traveling, especially by bus, because I get to see the scenery especially.

✓ I love looking out the window whenever I'm traveling, especially by bus, because I get to see the scenery.

The word 'especially' is repeated and redundant at the end. Removing the second 'especially' makes the sentence natural and avoids adverb overuse.

× Of course, yes, most of the time I love taking picture from the window of the bus when, uh, I'm traveling.

✓ Of course. Most of the time I love taking pictures from the window of the bus when I'm traveling.

'Taking picture' is incorrect; use the plural 'pictures' for general activity. Also split 'Of course, yes' to 'Of course.' for clarity and remove filler 'uh'. Keep 'the bus' if referring to a specific bus context.

× Especially the sunset because I get to keep all the memory within myself and watch it later.

✓ Especially the sunset, because I can keep the memory for myself and watch it later.

'Keep all the memory within myself' is unnatural; use 'keep the memory for myself'. Also change 'I get to' to 'I can' to express ability. 'All the' is unnecessary when speaking generally.

× I feel great to watch it again.

✓ I feel great when I watch it again.

Use a clause 'when I watch it again' to indicate timing. 'Feel great to watch' is ungrammatical; 'feel great' needs context or a gerund: 'I enjoy watching it again' or the suggested form.

× Umm, I prefer both.

✓ I prefer both.

Remove hesitation 'Umm' in formal responses. The sentence itself is acceptable, but filler should be omitted.

× I prefer somewhere that can have, uh, the Mountain View and the sea views at the same time, so it feels so relaxed to see both the sea and the view of the mountain from afar.

✓ I prefer somewhere that has a mountain view and sea views at the same time, so it feels very relaxing to see both the sea and the mountains from afar.

Use 'has' rather than 'can have'; 'the Mountain View' is wrongly capitalized and article usage is off—use 'a mountain view'. 'So relaxed' should be 'very relaxing' to describe the effect. 'View of the mountain' pluralized to 'mountains' for naturalness when speaking generally.