Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always look out the window when I travel by bus or car because the there have a beautiful senior and it can make me exciting and interesting. This senior is very interesting and.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always took photo of the senior outside car window because they helped me capture special movements during trip that I can look back at this picture on my phone and remember this place and feeling which make them Paris seniors.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
Thí sinh
Yes, I prefer mountain because when I have a trip when I go to Lhasa with my friend, the mountain is very beautiful and attract people. It's golden mountain and the mean is lucky a year.
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
Điểm: 42.0Gợi ý: 回答要直接、语法正确并且信息明确。注意冠词和名词单复数(the there → there are/the),用正确词汇替代错误词(senior → scenery/scenic view)。保持句子简短不超过5句,先给主题句,再用一两句具体理由或例子,并用连接词使句子连贯。可纠正发音或语法错误如时态和形容词形式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because there are often beautiful scenes to see. For example, I enjoy watching changing landscapes and interesting buildings as we pass by. This helps me relax and makes the journey more enjoyable.
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 注意时态和名词形式(took → take / photos; senior → scenery)。回答要更具体并且逻辑清晰,使用连接词(because, so, when)分开原因和结果。避免含糊的词组(special movements, Paris seniors),用准确表达说明拍照的目的和感受。控制在最多5句内。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I want to capture interesting moments during the trip. Later I can look at these photos on my phone to remember the places and my feelings. Sometimes I share the best shots with friends.
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 先直接回答偏好(I prefer the mountains),然後給出具體理由,並用連接詞(because, for example)。修正語法錯誤(mountain → the mountains; attract → attractive; mean → means? unclear)。避免模糊或無意義的描述("mean is lucky a year")。可提及個人經驗作為支持細節,但要表述清晰。
Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy the peaceful atmosphere and fresh air. For example, when I visited Lhasa with a friend, the golden mountains were stunning and made the trip unforgettable. Mountains help me feel relaxed and close to nature.
× Yes, I always look out the window when I travel by bus or car because the there have a beautiful senior and it can make me exciting and interesting.
✓ Yes, I always look out the window when I travel by bus or car because there is a beautiful scenery and it can make me excited and interested.
问题类型:There be(存在句)和形容词用法错误。句中原本用“the there have”是错误的存在结构,应使用“there is/are”。名词“scenery”不可数,前面不用复数或不定冠词,且拼写错误(senior→scenery)。另外,形容情感要用形容词“excited”和“interested”来描述人的感受,而不是“exciting/interesting”描述事物。建议:记住存在句结构为“There is/There are + 主语”,并区分可数与不可数名词;描述人的感受用-ed 结尾的形容词。
× Yes, I always took photo of the senior outside car window because they helped me capture special movements during trip that I can look back at this picture on my phone and remember this place and feeling which make them Paris seniors.
✓ Yes, I always take photos of the scenery outside the car window because they help me capture special moments during the trip so I can look back at these pictures on my phone and remember the place and feelings, which make them precious memories.
问题类型:过去时使用不当与词汇错误。原句中问的是一般习惯(do you take...),应使用现在时“take”而不是过去时“took”。名词“photo”应复数“photos”与前文“always”匹配;“senior”拼写错误,应为“scenery”;“movements”用词不当,应为“moments”;“this picture”与复数不一致改为“these pictures”;“make them Paris seniors”语义错误,推测想表达“make them precious memories”。建议:根据上下文判断时态(习惯用一般现在时);注意名词单复数一致及正确词汇搭配。
× Yes, I prefer mountain because when I have a trip when I go to Lhasa with my friend, the mountain is very beautiful and attract people. It's golden mountain and the mean is lucky a year.
✓ Yes, I prefer the mountains because when I went on a trip to Lhasa with my friend, the mountains were very beautiful and attracted people. They are called the Golden Mountains and they are believed to bring good luck for the year.
问题类型:现在时/过去时混用与主谓一致、冠词和词汇错误。首句“prefer”后通常接复数名词“the mountains”。原句中描述过去的旅行应使用过去时“went”和“were/attracted”。“mountain is very beautiful and attract people”主谓不一致,应把动词改为过去式“attracted”或使主语复数并用复数动词。短语“It's golden mountain”需要冠词或复数并用正确名称;“the mean is lucky a year”表达不清,意为“被认为带来一年的好运”,改为“they are believed to bring good luck for the year”。建议:根据时间状语选择时态,确保主语与动词在人称数上保持一致,使用正确冠词并用清晰常见表达。