Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be concise and direct: give a clear topic sentence, then one or two specific supporting details linked logically. Correct tense and word choice (e.g., “scenery” not “scenario”) and finish your sentence. Avoid repetition and incomplete endings.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out the window when I travel by bus or car. For example, I open the window to enjoy the scenery and check where we are, which helps me recognize landmarks and appreciate the natural environment.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence, then one specific reason and one brief example. Fix grammar (e.g., “it will remind me” not “it will Remember Me”), avoid repetition, and use linking words such as “because” or “so”.

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy taking photos from car windows because they help me remember special places. For instance, I often photograph rivers and mountain views so I can look back at those memories when I return home.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear preference sentence, then give one or two concrete reasons linked with connectors. Correct phrasing (e.g., “I prefer the mountains” and avoid repeated words like “biking, biking”). End sentences fully and keep responses within 1–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains to the sea. Since Nepal is landlocked, I often go hiking and mountain biking with friends to enjoy the scenery and outdoor activities.

× Obviously when I travel by bus or by car, I used to open the window and look over the scenario outside to capture the beautiful natural environment and the to know the location.

✓ Obviously when I travel by bus or car, I open the window and look at the scenery outside to take in the beautiful natural environment and to know the location.

The phrase 'used to open' implies a past habitual action; here the student is describing a present habit, so simple present 'open' is correct (Problem type 9 applies because the past participle/past habitual form was used incorrectly). 'Look over the scenario' is unnatural — use 'look at the scenery'. 'To capture' when referring to seeing/experiencing is better as 'to take in'; 'and the to know the location' has an extra article and incorrect infinitive form, corrected to 'and to know the location'. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and choose natural collocations (open the window, look at the scenery, take in the environment).

× Also it really helped me to.

✓ Also it really helps me.

The fragment 'Also it really helped me to.' is incomplete and mixes past 'helped' with an unfinished infinitive 'to.' The response describes a current habitual benefit, so use present 'helps' and complete the sentence without an unnecessary 'to.' Suggestion: ensure verbs match the intended time frame and complete the sentence with an object or omit the trailing 'to'.

× Yes, I do love to take photos of beautiful landscape from car windows while I'm traveling.

✓ Yes, I do love to take photos of beautiful landscapes from car windows while I'm traveling.

'Landscape' here refers to countable scenes in general and should be plural as 'landscapes' or use 'the landscape' for a general mass noun. Using plural matches 'photos of' multiple scenes. Suggestion: use plural for countable nouns when referring to multiple items or general instances.

× For example, I take photos of river, mountains and hills which I love because it it will Remember Me in future.

✓ For example, I take photos of rivers, mountains and hills, which I love because they will remind me in the future.

Several issues: 'river' should be plural 'rivers' to match 'mountains and hills.' 'It it will Remember Me in future' has repetition and incorrect capitalization and pronoun use. Use 'they will remind me in the future' or 'they will help me remember in the future.' Problem type 10 addresses present participle but here main issues are plural and pronoun/verb choice; corrected accordingly. Suggestion: match plural nouns, use appropriate pronouns (they), and use 'remind' rather than 'remember' (active form: photos remind me).

× I I can remember it in future.

✓ I can remember it in the future.

The sentence contains a duplicated pronoun 'I I' and lacks the article 'the' before 'future.' Add 'the' and remove duplication. Suggestion: proofread to remove repeated words and include necessary articles for fixed expressions like 'in the future.'

× I prefer mountain over the sea because as our country Nepal is a landlocked country so I often go to hiking and biking, biking over the mountain to see the beautiful landscape and I usually go with my friends to have fun for.

✓ I prefer the mountains to the sea because our country, Nepal, is landlocked, so I often go hiking and biking in the mountains to see the beautiful landscape, and I usually go with my friends to have fun.

Multiple article and preposition errors: 'prefer mountain over the sea' should be 'prefer the mountains to the sea.' 'As our country Nepal is a landlocked country' is awkward—use commas and omit repeated 'country.' 'Go to hiking' should be 'go hiking'; 'biking over the mountain' is unnatural—use 'biking in the mountains.' The final fragment 'to have fun for' is incorrect; use 'to have fun.' Suggestion: use correct collocations: prefer X to Y, go hiking/biking (no 'to'), and use articles ('the mountains').