Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is natural and directly responds, but you can improve by adding one specific detail and a linking word to make it more coherent. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences) and vary vocabulary (e.g., use 'public transport' or 'long journeys').

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out the window when travelling by bus or car because I enjoy watching changing landscapes. For example, on long journeys I like to observe towns and green fields, which helps me relax and pass the time.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but has some grammatical errors and could be more specific. Use a linking word (e.g., 'because' or 'so') and correct noun phrases (‘coastal line’ → ‘coastline’). Give a brief example of what you photograph.

Ví dụ: Occasionally I take photos from the car window, but only on the coastline because the sea and sky create striking colours. For instance, I often photograph the sunset over the beach, capturing reflections on the water.

Gợi ý: The answer communicates your preference but has grammar and word-choice problems. Use a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and link causes and effects with words like 'because' and 'so'. Be specific about how the sea affects you and avoid awkward phrases like 'force upcoming works.'

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because driving along the coastline always makes me feel relaxed and recharged. As a result, I return to work feeling more energetic and better able to focus.

× I always look out the window at the scenery when traveling by public transportation because I like to enjoy the view.

✓ I always look out the window at the scenery when traveling by public transportation because I enjoy the view.

The sentence uses 'like to enjoy' which is unnecessary and awkward in simple present context. Use simple present 'enjoy' to express a habitual preference. Suggestion: replace 'like to enjoy' with 'enjoy' for conciseness and naturalness. Grammar problem type ID: 6

× Yes, but not often. I take photos of the scenery outside the car window only when I'm riding on coastal line because I love the sea and sky make up a beautiful structure in my photos.

✓ Yes, but not often. I take photos of the scenery outside the car window only when I'm riding on the coastal line because I love how the sea and sky form a beautiful backdrop in my photos.

Errors: missing article before 'coastal line' and incorrect clause 'I love the sea and sky make up...'. Use 'the coastal line' (article) and a correct subordinate clause with 'how' plus verb 'form' to describe what is loved. Also 'backdrop' fits collocation better than 'structure'. This fits types: incorrect use of prepositions/articles and verb structure with -ing; primary issue fixed with gerund/subordinating structure. Grammar problem type ID: 8

× I prefer low sea because whenever I driving along the coastline, the scenery always make me feel relaxing and recharge.

✓ I prefer the sea close to shore because whenever I drive along the coastline, the scenery always makes me feel relaxed and recharged.

Multiple issues: 'low sea' is unnatural; use 'the sea close to shore'. 'Whenever I driving' missing auxiliary 'am' or should be 'I drive' for habitual action — use simple present 'I drive'. Subject-verb agreement: 'the scenery always make' should be 'makes'. Verb/adjective choice: 'feel relaxing and recharge' is wrong; use adjectives 'relaxed' and 'recharged' to describe feelings. This correction addresses adjective/adverb misuse and subject-verb agreement. Grammar problem type ID: 13

× This makes me get more energy to force upcoming works.

✓ This gives me more energy to take on upcoming work.

'Makes me get' is unnatural; use 'gives me' or 'helps me gain'. 'To force upcoming works' is incorrect collocation—'force' is wrong verb and 'works' plural is awkward; use 'take on upcoming work' or 'handle upcoming tasks'. This is a sentence structure and word choice error; correct to a natural English expression. Grammar problem type ID: 26}]}tegration would be invalid JSON due to trailing text. The above is final.