Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more grammatical, concise, and give specific details. Start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb agreement, and add one or two specific examples of what you notice. Use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy watching how the landscape changes. For example, I like seeing fields and small villages transform into city streets, and I often notice seasonal details like blooming trees in spring.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence, correct minor errors, remove filler words, and add a brief reason with a linking word. Be specific about how watching differs from photographing.

Ví dụ: No, I usually don’t take photos of scenery outside the car window because I prefer to watch and absorb the view. For instance, I find that photographing distracts me from noticing small details like light changes or people’s daily activities.

Gợi ý: Answer directly (no 'yes'), fix comparative grammar, and provide one specific reason with a linking word and an example to make the response more detailed and natural.

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains to the sea because I enjoy the fresh air and quiet atmosphere. For example, I like hiking on trails to see panoramic views and native plants, which feels more peaceful than crowded beaches.

× Yes, of course, because I like watching the scenery and it changes. And it have a lot of expressions it gave me.

✓ Yes, of course, because I like watching the scenery as it changes. It gives me many feelings and expressions.

Two issues: 'it have' is incorrect because the subject 'it' requires the third person singular present form 'has' or better here 'gives' to match meaning; this is a third person singular verb form error (map to present participle/verb form correction). Also the run-on and unclear phrasing 'a lot of expressions it gave me' is ungrammatical. Use 'as it changes' to connect clauses and 'It gives me many feelings and expressions' to express the intended meaning. Suggestion: use correct third-person singular present verbs (gives/has) and split ideas into clear clauses.

× I don't take photos of scenery outside the car window, umm because I prefer watching it by my self and I like feeling at the time, so yeah.

✓ I don't take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I prefer watching it by myself and enjoying the moment.

Errors: 'scenery' usually takes the definite article here ('the scenery'). 'by my self' is incorrect spelling and form; use the reflexive pronoun 'myself'. 'I like feeling at the time' is unidiomatic; use 'enjoying the moment' to convey meaning. Also remove filler 'umm' in formal speech. Suggestion: use correct articles and reflexive pronouns and choose idiomatic expressions like 'enjoying the moment'.

× Yes, I prefer the mountain than the sea. I like nature and I like the scenery from the mountains.

✓ Yes, I prefer the mountains to the sea. I like nature and I like the scenery of the mountains.

Use plural 'mountains' when comparing in general and the correct comparative preposition is 'prefer A to B' not 'prefer A than B'. Also 'scenery from the mountains' is understandable but 'scenery of the mountains' is more natural. Suggestion: use 'prefer X to Y' and match noun number (mountains) when speaking generally.