Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
Thí sinh
Yes, I look out the window when I travel by a bus or a car. Passing scenery reminds me of my childhood.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
Thí sinh
Yes, I take photos of fields and lakes outside the window because they are picturesque and create memorable moment for me.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
Thí sinh
I prefer the mountains. When I see green trees and mountains, I feel comfortable and relaxed.
Do you look out the window at the scenery when travelling by bus or car?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答直接且自然,但可更简洁并补充具体细节以显得更充实。可以用一句主题句说明习惯,再用一两句举例或描述为什么触发童年回忆,注意避免重复(“by a bus or a car”可简化为“by bus or car”)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. The changing landscapes, like old houses and rice fields, often trigger memories of visiting my grandparents when I was a child, and I find it comforting to remember those times.
Do you take photos of the scenery outside the car window?
Điểm: 74.0Gợi ý: 回答明确但语言稍显单一和有小语法问题(例如“create memorable moment”应为“create memorable moments”或“create a memorable moment”)。建议在一句主题句后用关联词扩展细节,说明拍照的频率、用途或具体感受,丰富内容并使用正确搭配。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of fields and lakes outside the window because they look picturesque. I usually save these shots on my phone to look back on later or to share with friends, especially when the light is warm at sunset.
Do you prefer the mountains or the sea?
Điểm: 82.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了,表达了个人偏好和原因,但可以用更具体的描述和连接词来增强说服力,例如说明喜欢山上的哪些活动或感觉,并用because/so等连接词将原因衔接得更自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because the fresh air and quiet atmosphere help me relax. I enjoy hiking among green trees and listening to birds, which makes me feel peaceful and recharged.
× Yes, I look out the window when I travel by a bus or a car.
✓ Yes, I look out the window when I travel by bus or car.
句中不需要在“bus”和“car”前加不定冠词“a”。当说以某种交通工具出行时,通常用介词短语“by + 交通工具(无冠词)”。建议记住固定搭配“travel by bus / by car / by train”等,不要使用不定冠词。
× Passing scenery reminds me of my childhood.
✓ The passing scenery reminds me of my childhood.
此处“passing scenery”作为特指的景色,作主语时前面需要定冠词“the”来表明是“窗外经过的那些景色”。建议在类似表达中判断是否为特指,若是则使用“the”。
× Yes, I take photos of fields and lakes outside the window because they are picturesque and create memorable moment for me.
✓ Yes, I take photos of the fields and lakes outside the window because they are picturesque and create memorable moments for me.
两处错误:1)“fields and lakes”若指窗外看到的那些田野和湖泊,应使用定冠词“the”;2)“memorable moment”应使用复数“moments”更符合语义(拍很多张照片,产生许多难忘的瞬间)。建议注意可数名词单复数和特指场合使用定冠词“the”。
× I prefer the mountains. When I see green trees and mountains, I feel comfortable and relaxed.
✓ I prefer the mountains. When I see green trees and the mountains, I feel comfortable and relaxed.
第二句若指之前提到的“山”,应该在“mountains”前加定冠词“the”以保持指代一致性:前句“I prefer the mountains”后续再提到时用“the mountains”。建议保持同一谈话中对已提及事物使用定冠词以避免歧义。