Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid repetition and correct verb forms and word choice (e.g., 'enjoy' not 'enjoying', 'relaxed' not 'release').

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy seeing new places. For example, I like spotting local architecture and street scenes, which help me learn about a city. Also, it makes me feel relaxed and curious.

Gợi ý: Give a direct short answer, improve grammar and use linking words to explain conditions. Be specific about when you take photos and use correct tense and countable forms ('when the car stops', 'I prefer to photograph sculptures').

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't take photos from a moving car because it's dangerous. Instead, I take pictures when the car stops or when I get out to view something interesting, such as a sculpture or a striking building.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence that states your preference pattern, then give two specific contrasting reasons with correct grammar and linking words. Use accurate phrases ('depends on my mood', 'go hiking', 'gives me peace'). Avoid awkward phrasing like 'modes I have'.

Ví dụ: It depends on my mood: if I need to challenge myself or clear my head, I prefer hiking in the mountains because it feels empowering. However, if I'm stressed or anxious, I choose the sea because the sound of waves helps me relax and think more clearly.

× I really enjoying to watch the different view which I didn't meet before and it's a symbol of the new city, so it always makes me feel release and enjoyable.

✓ I really enjoy watching the different views that I haven't seen before, and they are symbols of a new city, so they always make me feel relaxed and happy.

The original uses 'enjoying' incorrectly after 'really' where simple present 'enjoy' is required (verb form error). After 'enjoy', the verb should be in the -ing form ('watching'), not an infinitive ('to watch'). 'Different view' needs plural 'views'. 'Which I didn't meet before' is unidiomatic; use 'that I haven't seen before' and present perfect for past experiences relevant now. 'It's a symbol' should agree with plural 'views' so 'they are symbols'. 'Feel release and enjoyable' uses wrong word forms; use adjectives 'relaxed' and 'happy'. Suggestions: use subject-verb agreement, use 'enjoy' + gerund, use present perfect for past experience with present relevance, and ensure adjectives are correct.

× Yes, I really look out the window at the scenery when traveling by the bus or car because I really enjoying to watch the different view which I didn't meet before and it's a symbol of the new city, so it always makes me feel release and enjoyable.

✓ Yes, I really look out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or car because I really enjoy watching the different views that I haven't seen before; they are symbols of a new city, so they always make me feel relaxed and happy.

The phrase 'by the bus or car' incorrectly uses the definite article; say 'by bus or car' for general means of transport. Also 'the different view' should be plural 'different views'. Suggestion: omit 'the' before modes of transport when speaking generally and match singular/plural nouns properly.

× So I really look out the window to watch the scenery.

✓ So I really look out the window to watch the scenery.

This sentence is acceptable in present simple to describe habitual action; no tense change needed. Keep as is. (No change besides punctuation/context.)

× Nope, because it's a little bit dangerous.

✓ No, because it's a little bit dangerous.

Use 'No' rather than informal 'Nope' in formal speaking tests. The tense and verb are fine; only register is adjusted.

× I really take photos when the car stop or I meet some point of view.

✓ I usually take photos when the car stops or when I come across a good viewpoint.

Subject-verb agreement: 'the car stop' needs third person singular 'stops' (subject-verb agreement). 'Meet some point of view' is unidiomatic; use 'come across a good viewpoint' or 'reach a viewpoint'. Also 'really take photos' is okay but 'usually' fits frequency better. Suggestions: ensure third person singular -s and use natural collocations like 'come across' and 'viewpoint'.

× So I prefer to seek photos for the sculpture or some point rather than take Photo by the car window.

✓ So I prefer to look for photos of sculptures or interesting spots rather than take photos through the car window.

'Seek photos for the sculpture' is awkward; use 'look for photos of sculptures' or better 'take photos of sculptures'. 'Some point' is vague — 'interesting spots' or 'viewpoints' is clearer. 'Photo' should be plural 'photos' and 'by the car window' should be 'through the car window'. Also use lowercase 'photo'. Suggestions: use natural collocations ('look for', 'take photos of', 'through the car window') and correct article/number forms.

× Actually, it depends on the different modes I have.

✓ Actually, it depends on my mood.

'Different modes' is incorrect word choice; the intended meaning is 'mood'. Use 'my mood'. The structure 'depends on the different modes I have' is awkward. Suggest replacing with the common expression 'depends on my mood'.

× If I want to overcome some difficult problems in my work, I really to climb a mountain or go for hiking.

✓ If I want to overcome difficult problems at work, I really like to climb a mountain or go hiking.

Missing verb after 'really' — 'I really to climb' is incorrect. Use 'I really like to climb' or 'I like climbing'. 'Go for hiking' is unidiomatic; use 'go hiking'. Also 'in my work' is better as 'at work'. Suggestions: include appropriate main verb ('like') and use correct collocations ('go hiking').

× But if some problems wait around me makes me feel annoyed or anxious, I prefer to go to the sea because the sea can give me a peaceful.

✓ But if some problems around me make me feel annoyed or anxious, I prefer to go to the sea because the sea can give me peace.

Subject-verb agreement: 'some problems ... makes' should be 'make'. 'Wait around me' is awkward; use 'around me' or 'surrounding me'. 'Give me a peaceful' is incorrect noun/adjective form; use 'give me peace' or 'make me feel peaceful'. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement, use natural prepositional phrases, and choose correct noun forms ('peace').