Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve fluency and reduce hesitations (e.g., remove filler words like 'Umm'). Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Keep answers concise (3–4 sentences). Also correct minor grammar: use consistent tense and spelling (traveling vs travelling) and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out the window when I travel by bus or car. For example, I enjoy watching people going about their day and noticing changes in the landscape as we pass through towns and countryside. I also like to listen to music while I watch because it helps me relax during the journey.

Gợi ý: Remove disfluencies and complete your sentences. Start with a direct topic sentence, then explain reasons with linking words ('because', 'so', 'therefore') and give a clear example. Fix unclear phrases (e.g., 'peak' is incorrect here) and avoid leaving sentences unfinished.

Ví dụ: No, I usually don’t take photos from a moving vehicle because images often come out blurred. Instead, I wait until the vehicle stops or I go to a high viewpoint, such as an observation deck, to take clear pictures of the scenery.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear preference sentence ("I prefer the sea") and follow with specific, relevant reasons using linking words. Avoid unclear or incorrect phrases ('prepared to see', 'warm seedlings', 'left a warm atmosphere'). Use accurate vocabulary to describe sensations and atmosphere.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I love the warm sunshine and the relaxing sound of waves. The sea makes me feel calm and happy, and I enjoy walking along the shore and breathing the fresh coastal air.

× Yes, I look out the window at the scenery when I am traveling by bus Umm, I like to listen to music and watch the scenery as it passes by.

✓ Yes, I look out of the window at the scenery when I am traveling by bus. I like to listen to music and watch the scenery as it passes by.

Use the correct preposition 'out of' with 'look' when referring to looking outside from inside a vehicle. Also split the run-on sentence into two sentences for clarity. The tense 'look' and 'am traveling' are correct for habitual and progressive contexts respectively.

× I like to watch people and the landscape.

✓ I like watching people and the landscape.

After 'like', both the infinitive and -ing form can be used, but 'like watching' sounds more natural when describing a habitual preference. This is a style/usage improvement rather than a strict grammatical error.

× Uh, no I don't because taking a photo inside a moving vehicle is really difficult for me peak and so I just take photos of the scenery when it stopped or I just go to a high skyscraper and.

✓ No, I don't, because taking a photo inside a moving vehicle is really difficult for me, so I only take photos of the scenery when it stops or when I go to a tall building.

Multiple issues: remove filler word 'peak' (seems incorrect), fix tense agreement ('when it stopped' -> 'when it stops') and sentence ending fragment 'and.' Use consistent present tense for habitual actions. 'High skyscraper' is redundant; 'tall building' is more natural. Add commas to separate clauses for clarity.

× I prepared to see because I love the warm seedlings and I just like the sound of waves crashing and I just left a warm atmosphere.

✓ I prefer the sea because I love the warm sunshine, and I like the sound of waves crashing because it creates a warm atmosphere.

Several errors corrected: 'I prepared to see' is incorrect—likely intended 'I prefer to see' or 'I prefer the sea.' 'Seedlings' is wrong contextually; 'sunshine' fits. 'I just left a warm atmosphere' is ungrammatical; change to 'it creates a warm atmosphere.' Use present simple 'prefer' and 'love' for general preferences. Remove extra 'just' for clarity.