Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は意図は伝わるが、文法ミス、冗長さ、論理のつながり不足が目立ちます。具体的には、"I don't that" は誤りで、動詞や時制の一致（"while I driving"→"while I'm travelling"など）が必要です。また、話が複数の行動に飛んでいるため、1〜2の主要な理由に絞り、接続詞で整理すると自然さが増します。改善のため、主語＋トピックセンテンスを明確にし、Supporting detailsを短く具体的に述べ、1〜2文にまとめてください。例：まず断定、次に1つか2つの理由、最後に短い結論。

Ví dụ: No, I usually don’t look out of the window. I prefer using my phone to watch short videos or chat with friends because it helps me relax and pass time. Occasionally I use travel time to do small assignments, but I mainly focus on my phone.

Gợi ý: 答えは簡潔で内容も分かるが、文法と語彙の使い方に改善の余地があります。例えば、"many variety of color"は不自然で、"a wide variety of colours"や"many different colours"が適切です。最後が未完で文が途切れているため、理由を完結に述べること。つなぎ語（because, so, which）を使って一貫性を持たせ、2〜3文で完結させてください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. I especially like taking photos of the sky because it shows a wide variety of colours and cloud shapes. Those pictures make me feel relaxed and remind me of peaceful moments.

Gợi ý: 理由が明確で自然だが、表現をもっと丁寧にし、語彙の幅を増やすと更に良くなります。"I really hate the insects"は少し強すぎる表現なので、"I dislike"や"I’m not a fan of"など穏やかな語に変えると自然です。また、理由を1〜2点に絞り、それぞれを短く説明すると論理が整います。接続詞（because, and）を適切に使い、最後に簡潔なまとめを加えてください。

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea to the mountains because I’m not a fan of insects, which are common in mountainous areas. I also enjoy swimming and watching fish, so coastal scenery makes me feel relaxed and happy.

× No actually I don't that because I usually watch YouTube or TikTok on my phone or talk with my friend with and do assignments while I driving by bus or car.

✓ No, actually I don't; I usually watch YouTube or TikTok on my phone, talk with my friend, and do assignments while I'm traveling by bus or car.

The sentence has several pronoun and verb form issues. 'I don't that' is ungrammatical; likely intended 'I don't' followed by explanation, so replace with a semicolon and the explanation. 'Talk with my friend with' repeats 'with' unnecessarily and should be 'talk with my friend' or 'talk to my friend.' 'While I driving' uses the wrong verb form; the progressive needs an auxiliary: 'while I'm driving' or 'while I'm traveling.' Also use commas to separate list items. Suggestion: simplify sentence structure, remove redundant words, and use the correct progressive form 'I'm traveling' or 'I'm driving.'

× Yes I do. I really love the scenery of sky because it has many variety of color and shapes of cloud. It makes me very relaxed and.

✓ Yes, I do. I really love the scenery of the sky because it has many varieties of color and shapes of cloud. It makes me very relaxed.

This sentence includes noun and number errors and an incomplete ending. 'Scenery of sky' needs the definite article 'the sky.' 'Many variety of color' is incorrect; use plural 'many varieties of color' or 'a great variety of colors.' 'Shapes of cloud' should be 'shapes of cloud' or better 'cloud shapes' or 'shapes of clouds' with plural. The final fragment 'and.' is incomplete; remove it. Suggestion: use correct articles and plural forms and complete the sentence.

× I prefer the sea to the mountains because I really hate the insects living in the mountains.

✓ I prefer the sea to the mountains because I really hate the insects that live in the mountains.

The original 'insects living in the mountains' is understandable but awkward; use a relative clause 'insects that live in the mountains' for clarity. The tense is present and correct, but the clause needs a clearer structure. Suggestion: add 'that' or use 'which' and keep present simple 'live.'

× I really love to swim and watch fish in the sea.

✓ I really love swimming and watching fish in the sea.

After 'love,' both the infinitive and gerund are possible, but to match natural speaking and parallel structure in a list use gerunds: 'swimming and watching.' This keeps verb forms consistent. Suggestion: use the gerund form for both verbs for smoother phrasing.