Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Cevabınızı daha akıcı ve doğru İngilizce ile ifade etmelisiniz. Konu cümlesi net ancak gereksiz tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları var (ör. 'cause', 'it's I feel this because', 'too relaxing and good so it's make me cheerful'). Cümle sayısını 2-3 ile sınırlayın; bağlaçlar kullanarak destekleyici bir neden verin ve uygun zaman/özne-fiil uyumuna dikkat edin. Öneri: Kısa ve net bir konu cümlesi kurun, ardından 'because' veya 'as' ile bir neden verin ve bir örnek ekleyin.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because I find the scenery very relaxing. For example, seeing trees and people going about their day makes me feel cheerful and helps pass the time quickly.

Gợi ý: Cümleniz karışık ve bazı ifadeler anlamsız. Olumsuzluğu net ve doğru kurun (I don't / I never). Ayrıca 'this January outside' veya 'not a fault' gibi hatalı kelime kullanımlarından kaçının. Nedeninizi mantıklı bir şekilde açıklayın ve bir bağlaçla destekleyin. Öneri: Kısa bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın, ardından nedeninizi 'because' ile açıklayın ve bir örnek verin.

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't take photos from a moving car because the pictures often turn out blurry. Instead, I prefer to keep the memory in my mind and take photos when we stop somewhere.

Gợi ý: Cevabınız tercihi belirtse de dilbilgisi ve söz dizimi yanlışları var ('see' yerine 'sea', 'It's more relaxing to mountains'). Kısa ve net bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın, sonra karşılaştırma yaparken 'more than' veya 'rather than' gibi ifadeleri kullanın ve bir neden ekleyin. Ayrıca 2-3 cümleyi aşmamaya çalışın.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea to the mountains because the sound of the waves is very calming. For instance, sitting by the shore helps me relax more than hiking in the mountains.

× Yes, I always look out the window when I travel by bus or car 'cause it's I feel this because I find too relaxing and good so it's make me cheerful.

✓ Yes, I always look out the window when I travel by bus or car because I find it very relaxing and it makes me cheerful.

The sentence uses awkward and incorrect verb forms and pronouns for present simple statements. Use 'find' and 'make' in present simple: 'I find it very relaxing' and 'it makes me cheerful.' Remove redundant phrases ('it's I feel this because') and replace 'good' with the adjective 'relaxing' or 'very relaxing' for clarity. Also use 'because' instead of informal ''cause'. Suggestions: simplify to 'I find it very relaxing' and ensure subject-verb agreement with 'it makes'. Use present simple consistently for habitual actions.

× I don't so not at all. I don't take a photos of this January outside. 'Cause I want to make that a memory, not a fault.

✓ No, I do not. I don't take photos of the scenery outside because I want to keep it as a memory.

The original contains redundant negatives ('I don't so not at all'), incorrect article use ('a photos'), wrong time reference ('this January outside'), and unclear reason ('not a fault'). Correct structure: use a clear negative 'No, I do not.' Use plural 'photos' without 'a' or singular 'a photo'. Replace awkward time phrase with 'the scenery' and express reason clearly: 'because I want to keep it as a memory.' Suggestions: avoid double negatives, match articles to count nouns, and state reasons in a concise clause beginning with 'because'.

× Of course, I prefer see because it's too relaxing. It's more relaxing to mountains.

✓ Of course, I prefer the sea because it's very relaxing. The mountains are more relaxing than the city.

Multiple issues: 'prefer see' is incorrect verb use—use 'prefer the sea.' Missing article before 'sea' and wrong comparative structure in 'It's more relaxing to mountains.' Use 'more relaxing than' to compare: 'The mountains are more relaxing than the city' (or another compared item). Also replace 'too relaxing' (often implies excessive) with 'very relaxing' for positive emphasis. Suggestions: use 'prefer' + noun phrase ('prefer the sea'), use proper comparative 'more... than', and include articles where needed ('the sea').