Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and concise, fix grammar and word choice, and add one or two specific details. Use a clear topic sentence, one supporting detail with a linking word, and avoid repetition. Keep it to no more than five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out the window when travelling by car or bus because I find the countryside scenery very relaxing. For example, I enjoy seeing rolling hills and small farms, so I often take a few photos to remember the trip. Also, I sometimes point out interesting views to my friends while we drive.

Gợi ý: Reduce hesitation sounds, correct grammar (use plural/singular and verb forms), and add a specific example of what you photograph. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then give one precise reason and an example using a linking word (e.g., 'for example').

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery because pictures help me remember special trips. For example, I usually photograph colorful fields or interesting old buildings during long drives, and later I review them to recall the experience.

Gợi ý: Provide a grammatically correct, coherent response with clear reasons and specific details. Fix sentence fragments and incorrect phrases, use linking words (e.g., 'because' and 'also'), and explain how the mountains make you feel with one concrete example. Keep it within three sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because I often go hiking there with my friends and enjoy the fresh air. Also, being at the top of a hill gives me a great sense of achievement and relaxation. For instance, after a difficult climb I like to sit and admire the wide view while catching my breath.

× I really enjoy looking through the window especially when we travel through the countryside side.

✓ I really enjoy looking through the window, especially when we travel through the countryside.

The verb 'enjoy' should be followed by a gerund (verb + -ing). 'Looking' is correct, but 'countryside side' is incorrect collocation; use 'the countryside'. Also add a comma before the adverbial phrase for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'enjoy' + gerund and common collocations: 'the countryside'. Use punctuation to separate clauses.

× Also I like taking a lot of photo for scenery.

✓ Also I like taking a lot of photos of the scenery.

'A lot of' is fine but 'photo' must be plural 'photos' because 'a lot of' requires a count noun plural. Use preposition 'of' with 'photos' to indicate subject. 'For scenery' is unnatural; use 'of the scenery'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns with 'a lot of' and correct preposition 'of'.

× Yes, I do, uh, because, uh, photo helps, helps me remember special trips, uh, with their, uh, beautiful senior scenery.

✓ Yes, I do, because photos help me remember special trips with their beautiful scenery.

'Photo' should be plural 'photos' to agree with 'help' (plural subject), causing subject-verb agreement; this falls under pronoun/noun usage. 'Helps' is singular and mismatches plural 'photos'. 'Their' is acceptable for trips but 'senior' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'scenic'. Remove filler words for clarity. Suggestion: Use 'photos help' (plural subject + plural verb) and use 'scenic scenery' or just 'beautiful scenery'.

× So, uh, I, I usually capturing a lot.

✓ So I usually capture a lot.

The verb 'capture' should be in base form with present simple 'usually capture' to describe habitual action. 'Usually capturing' would require an auxiliary (e.g., 'am usually capturing') for continuous aspect. Use concise present simple for habits. Suggestion: Use 'usually' + base verb for habitual actions: 'I usually capture a lot.'

× I like more mountains because I usually go hiking with my friends.

✓ I prefer mountains because I usually go hiking with my friends.

'I like more mountains' is incorrect word order and comparative idea. Use 'prefer' to express preference or 'I like mountains more.' This is a pronoun/word-order issue affecting meaning. Suggestion: Use 'prefer' for choices: 'I prefer mountains' or 'I like mountains more.'

× On the breath, fresh air.

✓ I enjoy the fresh air.

'On the breath, fresh air' is ungrammatical phrase order and unclear. Likely intended to express enjoying fresh air; restructure to a full sentence: 'I enjoy the fresh air.' Suggestion: Use complete sentence structure: subject + verb + object ('I enjoy the fresh air').

× Also when I am on the top of health, I feel I am.

✓ Also, when I am at the top of a hill, I feel happy.

The phrase 'on the top of health' is incorrect and unclear. Possibly meant 'on the top of a hill' or 'alive and healthy'. 'I feel I am' is incomplete. Provide a complete complement like 'I feel happy' or 'I feel great.' Suggestion: Use clear expressions and complete clauses: 'At the top of a hill' and complete the feeling: 'I feel happy' or 'I feel great.'