Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Avoid repetition ("usually" twice) and incorrect verb forms. Also correct collocations ("it makes me feel relaxed" not "fills me relaxing").

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by car or bus. For example, on long journeys I enjoy watching the changing landscapes because it helps me relax and passes the time more quickly.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give one clear reason with correct grammar and vocabulary. Use linking words like "because" and correct verb forms (e.g. "I’m afraid I might lose my phone"). Keep it to one or two supporting sentences and finish the thought logically.

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually take photos out of the car window because I'm afraid I might drop or lose my phone. Also, pictures taken through the window often look blurry, so I prefer to enjoy the view instead.

Gợi ý: Give a clear preference sentence, then add two specific reasons linked with words like "because" or "because of". Use correct vocabulary ("mountains", "summit/top", not "Montes" or "reach off the top"). Avoid vague endorsements like "Recommended."

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because they feel peaceful and the views from the summit are inspiring. In addition, the fresh air and quiet environment help me relax, whereas the sea can be noisier and more crowded.

× Yes, I usually look at usually like to look out the window when I travel by car or bus because it fills me relaxing and enjoy this scenery for example on long journeys.

✓ Yes, I usually like to look out of the window when I travel by car or bus because it relaxes me and I enjoy the scenery, for example on long journeys.

Errors: duplicate adverb 'usually', incorrect verb phrases ('look at usually like to look'), wrong preposition 'look out of' (use 'out of' or 'out the window'), 'it fills me relaxing' is ungrammatical and should be 'it relaxes me', missing subject for 'enjoy' (add 'I'), run-on sentence needs commas. Suggestion: remove redundancy, use correct collocations (relaxes me, enjoy the scenery), and punctuate to separate ideas.

× No, I don't like to take porters on outside the car window because I afraid to lost my phone obviously when we got arrive and then we.

✓ No, I don't like to take photos out of the car window because I'm afraid of losing my phone, especially when we arrive.

Errors: 'porters' is wrong word; use 'photos'. 'on outside the car window' should be 'out of the car window' or 'from the car window'. 'I afraid' needs auxiliary 'I'm afraid' and 'to lost' should be 'of losing' (use gerund after 'afraid of'). 'when we got arrive and then we' is ungrammatical; simplify to 'when we arrive' or 'when we get there'. Suggestion: choose correct nouns, use correct prepositions and verb forms (afraid of + gerund), and simplify the clause to avoid fragments.

× I prefer the Montes because they feel very peaceful and atmospheric when we reach off the top.

✓ I prefer the mountains because they feel very peaceful and atmospheric when we reach the top.

Errors: 'Montes' is misspelling of 'mountains'. 'reach off the top' is incorrect preposition; use 'reach the top'. Article use: 'the mountains' is acceptable when speaking about a specific mountain area, but 'mountains' alone is also fine. Suggestion: correct spelling, remove unnecessary preposition 'off', and keep 'reach the top' for natural phrasing.

× The reefs are amazing and the fresh air is very refreshing. Recommended.

✓ The views are amazing and the fresh air is very refreshing. I would recommend it.

Errors: 'reefs' is likely wrong word for mountains—use 'views' or 'scenery'. 'Recommended.' is a sentence fragment; use 'I recommend it' or 'I would recommend it'. Suggestion: choose words that match context (views/scenery for mountain scenes) and complete the sentence with a subject and verb.