Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は短くて直接的で良いですが、より自然で豊かな表現にするために理由や具体例を一つ付け加えてください。例えば、どんな風景を見るのが好きか、見ることでどう感じるかを述べると得点が上がります。また、発音の流れを良くするために短いフレーズをつなげて話す練習をしてください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus because I enjoy watching urban scenes and parks pass by, which helps me relax during the journey.

Gợi ý: 答えは肯定しており内容もある程度伝わりますが、'uh'などの間投詞が多く流暢さが下がっています。写真を撮る頻度やどんな被写体が好きか、どんな機材やアプリを使うかなど具体例を加え、接続語を使って論理的に繋げてください。発音を滑らかにするために短く区切らずに練習しましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the window, especially landscapes and the sky, and I usually use my smartphone to capture interesting light or colors.

Gợi ý: 回答は不明瞭で文法的に誤りが多く、理由の提示も曖昧です。まずは明確に選択を述べ（I prefer the mountains.）、次に理由を一つ具体的に述べてください（例えば安全面や活動が好き、泳げないから海は避ける等）。接続詞（because, so, therefore）を使って理由を論理的に示す練習をしてください。発音と語順にも注意しましょう。

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy hiking and I feel safer there since I can't swim very well, so I tend to avoid seaside activities.

× I like mountain, uh, then see uh, because.

✓ I like the mountains, and the sea.

The noun 'mountain' should be plural 'mountains' when speaking generally about that landscape type. Also use 'the' before plural geographic features when referring to a category you like. The original sentence is fragmented; combine ideas with 'and' to make a complete sentence. Suggested improvement: use plural nouns for general preferences (e.g., 'the mountains') and join clauses with a conjunction like 'and'.

× then see uh, because.

✓ and the sea.

The fragment 'then see' is likely a mispronunciation; 'see' here should be the noun 'sea'. Replace the incorrect word with 'sea'. Also include 'the' before 'sea' when mentioning it as a specific landscape. Suggested improvement: check homophones (see vs sea) and use the correct noun form.

× I don't like say, because I can't swim very well.

✓ I don't like swimming, because I can't swim very well.

After 'like' when referring to general activities, use the gerund (verb + -ing): 'like swimming'. The original uses the base verb 'say' incorrectly; likely intended 'swim' but must be 'swimming'. Suggested improvement: use gerunds after verbs like 'like', 'enjoy', 'avoid' when talking about activities.

× I don't like say, because I can't swim very well.

✓ I don't like swimming, because I can't swim very well.

Additionally, 'I can't swim very well' is correct, but ensure consistency: use 'swimming' in the first clause to mirror the activity mentioned in the second clause. Suggested improvement: keep verb forms consistent when referring to the same activity.

× Yes, I usually take uh, photos of the scenery. Uh, example, landscape, sky, sea.

✓ Yes, I usually take photos of the scenery, for example the landscape, the sky, and the sea.

The original is disfluent and lists nouns without articles or connectors. Use 'for example' to introduce examples and include 'the' before each landscape item when referring to them generally. Suggested improvement: use linking phrases ('for example') and proper articles ('the') to make lists clear.