Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: ปรับโครงสร้างประโยคให้ถูกต้อง ใช้รูปคำกริยาและคำนามให้เหมาะสม ลดคำอืดอาด (umm/uh) และจำกัดความยาวไม่เกิน 5 ประโยค เพิ่มคำเชื่อมที่ชัดเจน เช่น because/so/which เพื่อให้สมเหตุสมผลและเป็นธรรมชาติ ตัวอย่างสิ่งที่ต้องแก้: 'to looking' → 'to look', 'a scenery' → 'the scenery', 'it's make me feel' → 'it makes me feel'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because the scenery relaxes me. I especially enjoy watching the countryside pass by, as it feels refreshing after a busy week.

Gợi ý: แก้ไวยากรณ์เช่น 'sometime' → 'sometimes' และ 'to taking' → 'to take' หรือ 'taking pictures' ใช้รายละเอียดให้เฉพาะเจาะจงมากขึ้น และเพิ่ม linking word เพื่อเชื่อมความคิด เช่น because/so/therefore รวมทั้งหลีกเลี่ยงคำซ้ำซ้อน (take photos / take pictures)

Ví dụ: Yes, sometimes I take photos of the view outside because the light or colours look beautiful. For example, I often photograph sunsets over fields or interesting cloud formations when I travel.

Gợi ý: แก้คำที่ใช้ไม่ถูกต้อง เช่น 'prefer to see' → 'prefer the sea' หรือ 'prefer the mountains' และปรับกริยาให้ถูกต้อง ('it's made me feel' → 'it makes me feel'). ลดการหยุดชะงัก (umm/uh) และจัดประโยคให้กระชับ ใช้รายละเอียดสนับสนุนที่ชัดเจน เช่น ทำไมการเดินริมหาดถึงผ่อนคลาย ใช้คำเชื่อมเช่น because/so/which

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I enjoy walking along the beach; it makes me feel relaxed and refreshed. The sound of the waves and the fresh air help me unwind after a busy day.

× Absolutely, I love to looking out at the window of to see a scenery when I travel by bus or car because it's make me feel umm refresh and relax.

✓ Absolutely, I love looking out of the window to see the scenery when I travel by bus or car because it makes me feel refreshed and relaxed.

Errors: unnecessary 'to' before 'looking' and wrong verb form 'to looking' — use base verb + -ing without 'to' after 'love'. Use 'out of the window' rather than 'out at the window of'. 'To see the scenery' is correct phrase; use 'the scenery' not 'a scenery' because 'scenery' is uncountable. 'it's make' should be 'it makes' (subject-verb agreement and third person singular). 'refresh' and 'relax' should be past participle/adjective forms 'refreshed' and 'relaxed'. Suggestion: after verbs of liking (love, enjoy) use the gerund (verb+ing); use 'the' with uncountable or specific nouns like scenery; ensure subject-verb agreement with 'it makes'; use adjective/past participle forms to describe feelings (refreshed, relaxed).

× Of course sometime the world is beautiful so I love to taking a picture outside of the car.

✓ Of course, sometimes the world is beautiful, so I love taking pictures outside the car.

Errors: 'sometime' should be plural adverb 'sometimes'. 'I love to taking' mixes 'to' with a gerund; after 'love' use gerund 'taking' without 'to'. 'a picture' may be okay but plural 'pictures' is more natural when speaking generally. 'outside of the car' is wordy; use 'outside the car'. Suggestion: use 'sometimes' for frequency, drop 'to' before gerund, choose singular/plural consistently to match general statements, and prefer concise prepositional phrases like 'outside the car'.

× I prefer to see because I love to umm, like walking along the beach, umm, because it's made me feel a relaxed and live fresh when I just, uh, walking.

✓ I prefer the sea because I like walking along the beach, since it makes me feel relaxed and refreshed when I walk.

Multiple errors corrected that match listed types: 'I prefer to see' is unnatural and unclear; use 'I prefer the sea' to answer the question. 'I love to, umm, like walking' mixes verbs and filler words; choose one verb: 'I like walking'. Use simple present 'like' for habitual preferences. 'it's made me feel' is wrong tense; use present 'it makes me feel'. 'a relaxed and live fresh' uses incorrect article and adjective forms; use 'relaxed and refreshed'. 'when I just, uh, walking' lacks auxiliary and uses -ing incorrectly; use 'when I walk'. Suggestion: keep answers concise, use simple present for preferences and habitual actions, use correct adjective forms 'relaxed/refreshed', and use clear noun phrases like 'the sea'.