Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh), and give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep to 2–4 sentences and use precise vocabulary (e.g., observe, scenery).

Ví dụ: Yes — I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I enjoy observing the changing scenery, such as green mountains or dry plains, because it helps me understand the landscape and the local environment.

Gợi ý: Clarify and expand briefly with linking words: state whether you often do this or only sometimes, explain why you take photos, and remove fillers. Use natural phrases like "I often" or "sometimes" and say what you like to capture.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos from the car window because I recently developed a passion for photography. For example, I like to capture passing landscapes and interesting light on buildings, which I later use for my personal projects.

Gợi ý: Give a clear opinion with a specific reason and one supporting detail; avoid vague or poetic phrases and keep sentences natural. Use linking words like "because" or "so" and give a short example of an activity you enjoy at the sea.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I find it more peaceful and relaxing. For instance, I enjoy walking along the beach and listening to the waves, which helps me unwind after a busy week.

× Generally when I'm travelling by a bus or car, uh, I tend to look outside to notice the green lush mountains or to notice the barren lands or to explore the uh, uh, roads that we have as it helps me get a real time data on how things are.

✓ Generally, when I'm travelling by bus or car, I tend to look outside to notice the green, lush mountains or the barren land, or to observe the roads, as it helps me get real-time data on how things are.

The original sentence misuses the indefinite article 'a' before 'bus or car'; when speaking generally, omit the article: 'by bus or car'. 'Barren lands' is better as 'barren land' (uncountable) or 'barren areas'. 'To notice' is repetitive; vary verbs (use 'observe'). 'Real time' should be hyphenated as 'real-time' when used as a compound modifier or 'real time data' can be 'real-time data'. Also remove filler 'uh' and add commas for clarity. Grammar problem type ID:22

× I've recently developed a passion for photography and specifically in the niche of capturing the scenic, uh, moving image.

✓ I've recently developed a passion for photography, specifically in the niche of capturing scenic moving images.

The phrase 'capturing the scenic, uh, moving image' is awkward: 'capturing scenic moving images' uses plural 'images' to match 'capturing' and sounds natural. Remove filler 'uh' and unnecessary 'the' before a general noun. Also use plural to indicate multiple images. Grammar problem type ID:10

× Sea is characterized by serene calm as well as nature's gift.

✓ The sea is characterized by serene calm and is a gift of nature.

When referring to the sea as a general concept, use the definite article 'the sea'. 'Nature's gift' is better expressed as 'a gift of nature' to improve naturalness and flow. Also replace 'as well as' with 'and' for simpler coordination. Grammar problem type ID:22

× I tend to enjoy the sea view more than the hilly terrain of the mountains.

✓ I tend to enjoy the sea view more than the hilly terrain of the mountains.

This sentence is grammatical but could be tightened: 'the hilly terrain of the mountains' is redundant (terrain implies mountains). A clearer version: 'I tend to enjoy the sea view more than the hills' or 'I prefer the sea view to the mountains.' However, strictly speaking there is no plural/singular error; no mandatory change required. For clarity you might say 'I tend to enjoy the sea view more than the hills.' Grammar problem type ID:1