Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Reduce repetition and improve sentence structure. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct grammar (countable/uncountable, plural forms) and avoid repeating words like "definitely."

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. For example, I enjoy watching mountains and beaches because the views relax me and refresh my mind during long journeys.

Gợi ý: Give a fuller, more natural response: combine short sentences, avoid vague phrases like "different kinds," and use linking words to explain when and why you take photos. Correct collocations ("take photos" not "click").

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of the scenery outside the window, especially when the light is good or the landscape is unusual. For instance, I take pictures of sunsets and interesting mountain formations to remember the trip and share with friends.

Gợi ý: Make a clear, concise preference statement and support it with specific reasons. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words (because, so) and give one concrete example of what you enjoy in the mountains. Fix unclear phrases like "watching the floor and phone."

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because they help me relax and clear my mind. For example, I enjoy hiking forest trails and breathing fresh, cool air, which feels more peaceful than busy beaches.

× Definitely when I travel by car or bus to any beautiful scenery, I definitely watch different kind of sceneries like mountains, beaches because it helps me to make my mind fresh and active.

✓ Definitely, when I travel by car or bus to see beautiful scenery, I watch different kinds of scenery such as mountains and beaches because it helps to make my mind feel fresh and active.

The original sentence has issues with 'watch' + scenery (use 'see' or 'look at') and 'different kind' should be plural 'different kinds' or 'different kinds of scenery'; 'sceneries' is uncommon — use 'scenery' as an uncountable noun. Also word order and missing articles were improved. Suggestion: use 'see' or 'look at' for viewing scenes, use 'scenery' uncountable or 'kinds of scenery' for variety, and add commas for clarity.

× Definitely. When I watch any beautiful scenery outside, then I click different kinds of photographs. And I also click snaps with that with a view.

✓ Definitely. When I see beautiful scenery outside, I take different kinds of photographs, and I also take snaps with the view.

Use 'see' instead of 'watch' for scenery. 'Click photographs' is literal translation; natural English uses 'take photographs' or 'take snaps'. Remove unnecessary 'then' and redundant 'with that with a view'.Suggestion: use 'take photographs' and simplify phrases to 'take snaps with the view'.

× I am among I am a nature person, so I definitely like mountains the most because when I travel to mountains, it really makes my mind fresh and I feel really relaxed and. Enjoy it a lot in the mountains by. By watching the floor and phone I need it.

✓ I am a nature person, so I definitely like mountains the most because when I travel to the mountains it really refreshes my mind and I feel relaxed and enjoy being there a lot.

The original contains repeated fragments, sentence fragments, and unclear phrases ('watching the floor and phone I need it' is nonsensical). Corrections remove repetition, fix tense and subject-verb agreement ('it really refreshes my mind'), and combine fragments into coherent sentences. Suggestion: avoid repetition, ensure each sentence has a clear subject and verb, and remove irrelevant phrases.