Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and fluent. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, um), correct grammar (e.g. “it relaxes me” not “it's unwind me”), and finish the idea. Use one or two supporting details with a linking word. Keep to a maximum of 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I usually choose the window seat when I travel because I love watching the scenery. It relaxes me and makes the journey more enjoyable, so I prefer to travel during the daytime to see the view clearly.

Gợi ý: Be specific and reduce repetition of 'usually'. Begin with a direct answer, then add a concise reason and an example. Use precise vocabulary (e.g. “preserve memories” rather than “keeping it for a very longer term”). Limit to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos and short videos to preserve memories of beautiful places. For example, I photograph interesting landscapes and landmarks so I can look back on them later.

Gợi ý: Give a clear direct response (choose one or say you like both) and follow with one specific reason. Avoid hesitation and unfinished sentences; use linking words to structure the answer. Keep it to 2–3 complete sentences and correct grammar (e.g. “I prefer the mountains because I enjoy the cool weather”).

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy cool weather and peaceful surroundings. For example, I like hiking and staying in quiet mountain lodges where I can relax away from city noise.

× To be honest, my always favorite, uh, seat will be the window seat because I love watching scenery while traveling and it's also unwind me and win me and make me feel, uh, very satisfied.

✓ To be honest, my favorite seat is always the window seat because I love watching the scenery while traveling, and it also relaxes me and makes me feel very satisfied.

Pronoun and word order issues: 'my always favorite' is incorrect order; use 'my favorite seat is always the window seat' or 'my favorite seat is the window seat'. 'Watching scenery' needs the definite article 'the scenery'. 'it's also unwind me and win me and make me feel' uses incorrect verbs and pronouns: 'unwind' requires a form that takes a subject and makes someone relaxed (it relaxes me), 'win me' is incorrect in this context and should be removed, and verb forms must agree with singular 'it' ('makes me'). Suggestion: place adjectives in correct order, include articles where needed, and use correct verb forms that agree with the subject.

× Uh, and I always make sure, uh, to travel during the daytime so that.

✓ I always make sure to travel during the daytime so that I can see the view.

Sentence is incomplete and needs an appropriate clause to finish the idea. 'So that' requires a result or purpose clause (e.g., 'so that I can see the view'). Maintain present tense 'make sure' and add a clear infinitive clause for purpose.

× My best part of traveling will be capturing the images of this beautiful and mesmerizing scenery I usually feel.

✓ The best part of traveling for me is capturing images of the beautiful, mesmerizing scenery.

Awkward sentence structure and incorrect tense: 'My best part of traveling will be' is unnatural; use present 'The best part of traveling for me is'. 'Capturing the images of this beautiful and mesmerizing scenery I usually feel' is scrambled—remove 'I usually feel' or relocate it ('I usually feel this way'). Also include commas for adjective order. Suggestion: use 'for me' to show personal preference and a clear subject-verb structure.

× I usually love making memories and keeping it for a very longer term, so I usually prefer taking photos and videos while traveling.

✓ I usually love making memories and keeping them for a long time, so I prefer taking photos and videos while traveling.

Pronoun and quantifier errors: 'keeping it' should match plural 'memories' so use 'keeping them'. 'A very longer term' is ungrammatical; use 'for a long time' or 'for a longer time'. Also avoid repeating 'usually' unnecessarily. Suggestion: match pronouns to their antecedents and use correct quantifier phrases.

× To be honest about the mountains and are my favorite, uh, I cannot choose the one because mountains it's, uh, it's always, it has been a dream to, to stay in mountains because I love the cold weather and especially in mountains, I, I.

✓ To be honest, mountains are my favorite; I cannot choose between the mountains and the sea because living in the mountains has always been a dream for me. I love the cold weather, especially in the mountains.

Pronoun and sentence structure errors: 'about the mountains and are my favorite' misorders subject and verb; correct is 'mountains are my favorite'. 'I cannot choose the one' should be 'I cannot choose between the two' or 'I cannot choose between the mountains and the sea'. 'Mountains it's... it has been a dream to, to stay in mountains' mixes pronouns and tenses—use 'living in the mountains has always been a dream for me' or 'it has always been my dream to stay in the mountains'. Also include articles where needed: 'in the mountains'. Suggestion: reorder to subject-verb form, use 'between' for choices, and include articles with geographic features.