Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Avoid repetition and filler words (uh, and so on). Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, because, so).

Ví dụ: Yes. I usually look out of the window when I travel because I enjoy the fresh breeze and the passing scenery. For example, I like seeing green fields and local people going about their day, which makes trips more pleasant.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific examples. Remove tense errors and filler sounds. Use linking words like "for example" or "especially" to clarify when you take photos.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos from the car window, especially when I see something new or scenic. For example, I take pictures of mountains or interesting local food stalls when we pass them to remember the trip.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct answer (I prefer the mountains), then give two concise, specific reasons using linking words (because, although, therefore). Correct tenses and reduce repetition.

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because they are less familiar to me and visiting them feels special after a long trip. For instance, a five- to six-hour journey to the mountains gives me quiet, fresh air and beautiful views, which help me relax and feel peaceful.

× Yes, mostly I used to open the window and see the view while I'm traveling because I would love to enjoy the wind breeze and to see the view, uh, how beautiful it is and the greenery things and I would like to see and the people and so on.

✓ Yes, mostly I open the window and look at the view while I am traveling because I love to enjoy the breeze and see how beautiful the greenery and the people are.

The original mixes past habit 'used to' with present continuous 'I'm traveling' and uses infinitive forms incorrectly. Use present simple 'I open' or 'I usually open' for regular actions (Grammar Problem Type ID 10: Verb in the present participle form and ID 6: Present tense issue). 'Used to' implies a past habit, so it was removed to match the present habit. 'See the view' is better as 'look at the view'. 'Wind breeze' is redundant; 'breeze' suffices. Word order and noun forms were adjusted for natural English.

× Yes, I do mostly when I used to travel, uh, when I spot a new, uh, new place or a new food, I would like to take a picture with a good view.

✓ Yes, I mostly do when I travel; when I spot a new place or new food, I like to take a picture with a nice view.

Using 'used to travel' incorrectly suggests a past habit instead of a habitual action now. Replace with present simple 'travel' and 'I like' instead of 'I would like' for habitual actions (Grammar Problem Type ID 5: Past tense issue and ID 6: Present tense issue). Also simplify 'a new, uh, new place' to 'a new place' and 'good view' to 'nice view' for natural phrasing.

× And when there is a mountain or with a good view, I take photos and I used to take more pictures in the car window or out of that.

✓ When there is a mountain or a nice view, I take photos, and I usually take many pictures from the car window or outside.

'Used to take' incorrectly implies past habit; use 'usually take' for current habitual action (Grammar Problem Type ID 9: Verb in the past participle form and ID 6: Present tense issue). 'Out of that' is ungrammatical; replace with 'outside'. Also adjust word order for fluency.

× I do prefer the mountains because uh I living right now I'm living near to the sea which is I can easily go and see it but mountains is not that easy to see it because it's far from my home which is like 5 to 6 hours far.

✓ I prefer the mountains because right now I am living near the sea, which I can easily visit, but the mountains are not easy to visit because they are about five to six hours away from my home.

Several preposition and verb-form errors: 'living right now I'm living' is redundant; use 'right now I am living' or 'I am currently living'. Use 'near the sea' not 'near to the sea' in this context (Grammar Problem Type ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions). 'Mountains is' is subject-verb disagreement; use 'the mountains are' (Grammar Problem Type ID 27: Subject-verb agreement errors). '5 to 6 hours far' should be 'five to six hours away'. Also replace 'go and see it' with 'visit' for natural English.

× So I would prefer to see the mountain which makes me feel good and make peace and make my inner peace so good.

✓ So I prefer to see the mountains because they make me feel calm and give me inner peace.

'Would prefer' is conditional; for a general preference use 'prefer' (Grammar Problem Type ID 6: Present tense issue). 'See the mountain' should be plural 'the mountains' to match earlier reference. 'Make peace and make my inner peace so good' is ungrammatical and awkward; use 'make me feel calm and give me inner peace' for clear meaning (Grammar Problem Type ID 13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). Avoid repetition and use natural collocations.