Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Make the answer more natural and grammatically correct: start with a clear topic sentence, correct verb forms, and concise supporting details. Use a linking word to connect reasons and give one specific example of what you notice. Keep it to no more than 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out the window when I travel by bus or car because I enjoy observing the surroundings. For example, I like watching people on the street and the changing architecture as we drive, which helps me relax. Also, it gives me a quiet moment to think during the journey.

Gợi ý: Give a direct topic sentence, correct word order and verb forms, and add a short reason with a linking word. Offer a brief specific detail to support your preference (what you do instead). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: No, I usually don't take photos of scenery from the car because I prefer to enjoy the moment. Instead, I close my eyes or watch quietly, which helps me feel calm during the trip.

Gợi ý: Provide a clear topic sentence stating your preference, correct collocations (e.g. “view of the sea” not “window from the sea”), and use linking words to list reasons. Add one specific sensory detail to make the answer more vivid and keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I enjoy the colors and the sound of the waves. For instance, watching the sunlight on the water and listening to the waves relaxes me and makes me feel peaceful.

× Yes, I look out the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or car because I like this.

✓ Yes, I look out of the window at the scenery when traveling by bus or car because I like it.

Use of the phrasal verb 'look out of' is more natural than 'look out' when referring to a window; also 'like this' is vague and unidiomatic here — replace with 'like it' to refer clearly to looking at the scenery.

× When I watching out the window I can be silence and enjoy the feeling.

✓ When I watch out of the window, I can be silent and enjoy the feeling.

The verb after 'when' should be in base form for present simple (watch), not 'watching'. 'Silence' is a noun; use the adjective 'silent' to describe the subject. Add 'out of' for natural phrasing and a comma after the subordinate clause.

× No, I don't take photos of the scenery outside the car window because first, I don't like take photos.

✓ No, I don't take photos of the scenery outside the car window because, firstly, I don't like taking photos.

After verbs like 'like' use the gerund 'taking' rather than the base form. Also 'first' as a discourse marker is better expressed as 'firstly' or 'first of all', and add commas to set off the clause.

× I just want to enjoy the peace time.

✓ I just want to enjoy the peaceful time.

'Peace time' is not idiomatic; use the adjective 'peaceful' to modify 'time'. Alternatively, 'peace' as a noun would require rephrasing (e.g., 'enjoy the peace'). Also no article is needed before 'peaceful time' in this context.

× I prefer the sea because I like the colors of the sea and I like seeing the waves and I like the window from the sea.

✓ I prefer the sea because I like its colors, I like seeing the waves, and I like the view from the sea.

Reduce repetition and use 'its' to avoid repeating 'the sea'. 'Window from the sea' is incorrect; use 'view from the sea' or 'view from the shore'. Also connect phrases with commas and 'and' for better flow.

× This moment makes me more peaceful and relaxing.

✓ This moment makes me feel more peaceful and relaxed.

'Makes me more peaceful and relaxing' is ungrammatical because 'relaxing' describes something that causes relaxation; to describe the speaker's state use the adjective 'relaxed' and the verb 'feel' to indicate personal experience.