Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Good direct response and relevant supporting detail. To improve, make the answer slightly more concise, correct small grammar (use "when I travel" is fine but avoid redundancy like "when travelling by bus or car" and "when I travel by bus or car" back-to-back), and add a linking phrase to connect the topic sentence and the example (e.g., "For example" is fine). Keep within 3–4 sentences and vary vocabulary (e.g., use "soothes me" or "eases my mind").

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car because the changing scenery soothes me. For example, watching busy streets turn into green fields makes the journey feel shorter and helps me relax.

Gợi ý: Clear and relevant answer but contains a small mistake and can be more natural. Replace "take a photo of my phone" with "take a photo on my phone" or "take a photo with my phone." Use a linking word to show frequency (e.g., "Occasionally" or "Sometimes") and add a brief reason why you take photos to give more detail.

Ví dụ: Sometimes I do. If I see something striking, such as a dramatic sunset or a picturesque landscape, I’ll take a photo on my phone to remember the view.

Gợi ý: Good content and vivid detail, but there are grammar and word-choice errors that reduce clarity (e.g., "enjoy explore" should be "enjoy exploring," and "peaceful grow" seems incorrect — likely "glow"). Make the topic sentence concise, correct verb forms, and avoid repeating "enjoy." Add a linking word before the example (e.g., "For instance") and keep the description specific but compact (2–3 sentences).

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because I enjoy peaceful walks, fresh air, and exploring hiking trails. For instance, I love hiking early in the morning when sunlight filters through the trees and creates a warm, peaceful glow that helps me relax.

× I also enjoy explore the trails.

✓ I also enjoy exploring the trails.

The verb 'enjoy' must be followed by a gerund (-ing form). 'Explore' is the base form, so it should be 'exploring'. To improve, memorize verbs that require gerunds (enjoy, avoid, finish, consider) and practice making noun-like verb phrases (e.g., 'enjoy exploring').

× I will take a photo of my phone to capture the moment.

✓ I will take a photo with my phone to capture the moment.

The preposition 'of' is incorrect here; 'take a photo with my phone' correctly indicates the instrument used. To improve, study common prepositions of instrument (with) versus possession (of) and practice making sentences describing tools: 'with my phone', 'with a camera'.

× creates a warm, peaceful grow that helps me relax.

✓ creates a warm, peaceful glow that helps me relax.

The word 'grow' is a verb; the intended noun is 'glow'. This is a word choice error in adjective/noun usage. To improve, check context to ensure chosen word fits meaning (light giving a 'glow'). Reading and vocabulary exercises help reduce such mistakes.