Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 注意句子时态和语法一致，避免重复表达（如"really made me really makes me"）。回答要简洁有力：先给出明确观点，然后用1-2句具体理由或例子支持。可适当使用连接词（例如"because", "so", "which"）来增强连贯性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus because watching the changing landscapes relaxes me and lifts my mood. For example, I enjoy seeing fields and small villages pass by, which helps me unwind after a busy day.

Gợi ý: 注意动词时态和主谓一致（例如"something catch my eyes"应为"something catches my eye"）。回答时用一到两句具体细节说明拍照的频率或用途，避免不必要的过去时混用，保持句子在3-4句内。

Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes take photos when I see particularly beautiful views that catch my eye. I usually send those photos to my family and friends so they can enjoy the colors and scenery too.

Gợi ý: 注意发音拼写和表达准确性（"growled"应为"grew up"；"sounds of wave"应为"the sound of the waves"）。先直接表明偏好，然后给出具体原因并用连接词衔接，句子控制在最多四句内，词汇可更自然贴切（例如"fresh sea air"）。

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I grew up near the coast and feel comfortable there. The sound of the waves and the fresh sea air always help me relax and feel peaceful.

× Looking at changing views really made me really makes me relax and feel at ease.

✓ Looking at changing views really makes me relax and feel at ease.

句子同时使用了过去式“made”和现在时“makes”，时态混用。根据上下文（一般喜欢的行为），应使用一般现在时“makes”。建议保持时态一致，描述习惯或常态时用一般现在时。

× I would say yes if I come across the beautiful scenery or something catch my eyes.

✓ I would say yes if I come across beautiful scenery or something catches my eye.

原句中“something catch my eyes”主谓不一致且表达不自然。条件句中“come across”可保留，主句用条件表达“would say”。“something”作为第三人称单数，动词应用“catches”；“my eyes”常用单数短语“my eye”来表示某物吸引注意。建议：第三人称单数动词+s，使用惯用搭配“catch my eye”。

× I usually showed a photo to share with my family and friends.

✓ I usually show photos to share with my family and friends.

句子使用频率副词“usually”表示习惯，应使用一般现在时而非过去时“showed”。此外复数更自然地表示多次动作，故改为“show photos”。建议：描述习惯时用一般现在时并考虑复数。

× They were enjoying the colors and beautiful sights.

✓ They enjoy the colours and beautiful sights.

原句使用过去进行时“were enjoying”与上下文（通常我会给家人朋友看照片，他们的反应）不一致。应使用一般现在时“enjoy”来表达经常发生或普遍事实。建议：描述常态或习惯时用一般现在时。

× See, definitely since I growled by the seaside, I'm familiar with the view of the sea.

✓ Definitely — since I grew up by the seaside, I'm familiar with the view of the sea.

原句有多个问题：‘See’多余且口语化，‘growled’是错词（意为“咆哮”），正确应为“grew up”（在…长大）。因为谈及过去的成长经历，用过去式“grew up”。建议用“since I grew up by the seaside”表达原因，并去掉多余的插入语。

× It feels kind to me.

✓ It feels comforting to me.

原句中“kind”用于描述感觉不恰当，‘kind’通常形容人或行为。描述使人感到安宁应使用“comfortable/comforting”。建议选择合适的形容词如“comforting”或“soothing”。

× There is something like sounds of wave and fresh sea area that really made me feel at ease.

✓ There are sounds of waves and the fresh sea air that really make me feel at ease.

原句中“There is”与后面复数“sounds”不一致，应改为“There are”。“sounds of wave”应为“sounds of waves”；“fresh sea area”措辞不自然，应为“fresh sea air”。整体表达描述一般事实，应使用一般现在时“make”，而不是过去式“made”。建议：注意主谓一致、名词形式（单复数）及固定搭配“sea air”。