Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は意図が分かるが、文法と語順の誤りが多く、冗長です。まずは主題文を明確にし（例：Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car.）、その後で理由を1〜2文で具体的に述べる練習をしてください。接続詞（because, so, sometimes）を適切に使い、時制を一致させるように注意しましょう。例を加える際は簡潔にし、文は最大5文までに抑えてください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out of the window when I travel by bus or car. I enjoy watching the changing scenery because it’s interesting to see different buildings and landscapes. Sometimes I try to identify unusual towers or landmarks and later search for information about them online.

Gợi ý: 意味は伝わるが、文法ミスと繰り返しが目立ちます。まずは短い主題文で答え（例：Usually I don’t.）、理由を1文で続けてください。動詞の形（do not → don’t / cannot take → can’t take）や語順に注意し、重複を避けます。最後に条件を示す副詞節（If the car stops…）を使うとより自然です。

Ví dụ: Usually I don’t take photos of the scenery outside the car window because the vehicle is moving too fast and the pictures often come out blurry. However, if the car stops, I will take a few photos to remember the place.

Gợi ý: 主張は明確ですが、文法、語彙選択、論理のつなぎが不自然です。比較を述べるときは明確な理由を2つまでに絞り、接続詞（because, while, for example）で論理を整理してください。時制や名詞の単複（the mountain → the mountains）に注意し、冗長な表現を避けてください。

Ví dụ: I prefer the mountains because they offer enjoyable activities in both summer and winter. For instance, I can hike or relax there in summer, and go skiing in winter, while the sea is mainly enjoyable in summer only.

× Yes, I every time I went to the street lookout, the window at the scenery when I traveling by bus or car because I can't see that change of the scenery and it is so interesting for me and sometimes I can't find so interesting tower or buildings, so I try to research about it.

✓ Yes, I always look out the window at the scenery when I travel by bus or car because I can see changes in the scenery and it is very interesting to me. Sometimes I find towers or buildings that interest me, so I try to look them up.

The sentence mixes past and present verb forms and uses incorrect verb forms. Use simple present for habitual actions: 'always look' and 'travel'. 'I went' and 'I traveling' are incorrect here (tense and form). 'Can't see that change' should be 'can see changes' to express ability and plural. 'So interesting for me' should be 'very interesting to me'. 'I try to research about it' is unnatural; use 'look them up'. Suggestion: keep consistent present tense for routines, use base verb forms after subjects (I travel), and use natural collocations like 'look out the window', 'look them up'.

× Usually I do not take photos of the scenery outside the car window and because the car is moving so fast so my photo do not I cannot take photos so clearly.

✓ Usually I do not take photos of the scenery outside the car window because the car is moving so fast and I cannot take clear pictures.

The sentence incorrectly duplicates negation and misorders modal/auxiliary verbs. Use a single negative: 'do not take' or 'cannot take'. 'My photo do not I cannot' is ungrammatical. Combine reasons with 'because' and place adjectives before nouns: 'clear pictures'. Suggestion: use one negative auxiliary and keep clauses in natural order: reason after 'because'.

× But when I when I my car is stopping, I try to take photos and to remember to record that situation.

✓ But when my car stops, I try to take photos and record the scene to remember it.

The original contains repetitions and incorrect progressive form 'my car is stopping' which is awkward—use simple present 'my car stops' for habitual brief stops. 'To remember to record that situation' is wordy; use 'record the scene to remember it'. Suggestion: remove repeated words and use concise, natural phrasing; prefer simple present for habitual events and infinitive usage only when needed.

× I prefer the mountains because foresee the summer is only the season we can so enjoy the sea.

✓ I prefer the mountains because in most places summer is the season when we can enjoy the sea.

'Foresee the summer' is incorrect; likely meant 'in most places' or 'usually'. 'Is only the season we can so enjoy the sea' has word order and extra 'so'. Use 'is the season when we can enjoy the sea'. Suggestion: use clear temporal expressions and the clause 'season when' to introduce the ability to enjoy the sea.

× However, for mountains we can like the mountain in summer and on winter we can play the summer winter sports, for example skiing.

✓ However, with mountains we can enjoy them in summer, and in winter we can do winter sports, for example skiing.

Prepositions are incorrect: use 'with' or 'at' depending on meaning; 'on winter' should be 'in winter'. 'We can like the mountain' is awkward—use 'enjoy them' or 'enjoy the mountains'. 'Summer winter sports' is unclear; use 'winter sports'. Suggestion: use 'in summer'/'in winter' and correct noun phrases like 'winter sports'.

× So I prefer the mountain.

✓ So I prefer the mountains.

Singular/plural consistency: earlier speaker refers to mountains generally, so use plural 'mountains' rather than singular 'mountain'. Also 'prefer the mountains' is a present simple preference. Suggestion: match number (plural) when speaking about a category or general preference.