Travelling— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be clearer and more natural: start with a direct topic sentence, correct misused words, reduce hesitation, and add one specific detail using a linking word. For example, say you often look out the window when travelling by car and give a specific reason such as enjoying changing landscapes or noticing details like shops or trees. Keep the answer to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often look out the window when I travel by car because I enjoy watching the changing landscapes. For example, I like noticing small details such as local shops, trees and architecture, which makes the journey more interesting.

Gợi ý: Improve accuracy and coherence: give a clear topic sentence, avoid repeated filler words, correct word choice (use "memories" not "memory"), and provide a brief specific example of what you photograph. Use a linking phrase like "for example" or "such as."

Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos out of the car window because I like to capture memorable views. For example, I usually photograph interesting buildings, sunsets, or unusual road scenes so I can look back on the trip later.

Gợi ý: Make the answer more fluent and specific: start with a direct statement of preference, give two clear reasons using linking words (for example, "because" and "also"), and include a brief specific activity to illustrate. Reduce hesitations and correct grammar ("activities" and "on the beach").

Ví dụ: I prefer the sea because I enjoy swimming and relaxing on the beach. Also, I like the waves and beach activities such as volleyball and sunbathing, which I find more enjoyable than climbing mountains.

× I usually look out the window of the skin.

✓ I usually look out the car window.

The phrase 'window of the skin' is incorrect and unclear. The correct preposition and noun for a vehicle window is 'car window' or 'the window of the car.' Use prepositions to show relationships: 'out the car window' or 'out of the car window.' Keep it simple: 'look out the car window.'

× Agree when I travel by car because when I look out the window I can see many views uh, about scandaly or the road.

✓ I agree. When I travel by car, I look out the window because I can see many views, such as the scenery or the road.

The original mixes fragments and has an incorrect word 'scandaly.' Use a complete sentence and appropriate connector: 'I agree.' Use 'such as' to introduce examples and correct noun 'scenery.' Also add commas for clarity and correct sentence order: main clause then reason clause or vice versa.

× Umm, I really like to look out the window.

✓ I really like to look out the window.

Remove unnecessary filler 'Umm' in formal responses. The sentence is otherwise correct; just omit fillers for clearer spoken or written English.

× I usually take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I want to capture the scenery and the view.

✓ I usually take photos of the scenery outside the car window because I want to capture the view.

The original repeats 'scenery' and 'the view.' Use one noun to avoid redundancy. The verb form 'take photos' is correct; simplify the object to 'the view.'

× I think uh, take photo of the Earth Canary outside the car window is a good way to memory umm, photo.

✓ I think taking photos of the landscape outside the car window is a good way to preserve memories.

The phrase 'Earth Canary' is incorrect and unclear. Use the gerund 'taking' after 'think' when expressing opinion about an action. 'A good way to memory photo' is ungrammatical; use 'a good way to preserve memories' or 'to remember the trip.' Replace informal fillers and choose correct nouns.

× MMM I prefer the sea more because I can swim in here and I like umm, see the wave.

✓ I prefer the sea because I can swim there and I like to see the waves.

Do not use 'more' with 'prefer' (prefer already implies comparison). Use 'there' rather than 'in here' when referring to the sea. Use the infinitive 'to see' after 'like' and plural 'waves.' Also remove filler 'MMM' and 'umm.'

× And yes, I like uh, many activity in the beach then climb the mountain.

✓ And yes, I like many activities on the beach more than climbing mountains.

Use plural 'activities' for countable actions. Use the preposition 'on the beach.' Use 'more than' to compare preferences: 'activities on the beach more than climbing mountains.' Also avoid filler 'uh.'